[Electro-psych-amb pop] Ixox/Ouroboros: It's all gone (v4)
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1349 posts since 12 Jan, 2003 from Paris
UPDATE june 22...
Version 4 ready... same link...
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Thanks to ouroboros for this lyrics
Here is my first attemps to electro ambiant pop.
It's all gone
This is the longest song i've ever written : 4'38 (vurt, don't laugh !!!)
I'm listening to all suggestion and remarks.
Thanks,
Xavier
Version 4 ready... same link...
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Thanks to ouroboros for this lyrics
Here is my first attemps to electro ambiant pop.
It's all gone
This is the longest song i've ever written : 4'38 (vurt, don't laugh !!!)
I'm listening to all suggestion and remarks.
Thanks,
Xavier
Last edited by Ixox on Wed Jun 22, 2005 8:08 pm, edited 5 times in total.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1349 posts since 12 Jan, 2003 from Paris
Almost on page 2 and only 10 views...
Fortunately i've just uploaded a version 2.
Better drum sound and Better Mix....
Same link...
Xavier
Fortunately i've just uploaded a version 2.
Better drum sound and Better Mix....
Same link...
Xavier
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1349 posts since 12 Jan, 2003 from Paris
Thanks for the feedback.
I changed the title to make it more attractive
I changed the title to make it more attractive
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- KVRAF
- 7880 posts since 16 Apr, 2003 from -on the outside looking in
So i've been listening to this, and enjoying it tremendously. It's very cool how unique the sound is, and in particular I like the build up for the chorus; adds nice energy to the track. Some very trippy sounds there.
Did you use your delay plug for the springy/metallic sound I'm hearing?
..what goes around comes around..
- KVRAF
- 3265 posts since 22 Sep, 2003 from under the sun
Xavier, i'll be honest: i think the instrumentation, although interesting, doesn't perfectly work. it is like there were a lot of different parts that play for themselves, not finding a way to sound together.
i believe that the main culprit is the guitar, during the verse. it sounds off tempo and a little clumsy.
on the other hand, the "atmosphere" and the main melody and harmony are very cool, i love that style.
i'm not sure it qualifies as electro, tho.
i believe that the main culprit is the guitar, during the verse. it sounds off tempo and a little clumsy.
on the other hand, the "atmosphere" and the main melody and harmony are very cool, i love that style.
i'm not sure it qualifies as electro, tho.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1349 posts since 12 Jan, 2003 from Paris
I'm glad you like it.... (I'm happy with the result too ).ouroboros wrote:
So i've been listening to this, and enjoying it tremendously. It's very cool how unique the sound is, and in particular I like the build up for the chorus; adds nice energy to the track. Some very trippy sounds there.
Did you use your delay plug for the springy/metallic sound I'm hearing?
I used my delay on the voice and on the hithat.
The springy/metalic sound ? (on the right ?)... it's a simple sound of "SubDuer" through Pan-Oh!-Rama.
I used only free vst instrument except microtonic for the drums. The others are : Triangle II (*2) , MinimogueVA, Mr ray73 and SubDuer.
@Wopelka : Thanks Philippe, for the feedback.
I understand what you mean.
The guitare is often out of sync, i definitely have to re do it. More over, at 2 or 3 moment i didn't know what to play and that can be heard...
I also think some of the synth sounds are sometimes too loud which makes them sound a little out of the mix...
I'll fix all that.... Thanks....
That is definitely ELETRO !!!!
If you want to listen to good mysic of this style listen to the CD of "Sebastien Schuller" - Happyness.
I bought it last week and it made me want to do a song in this style.
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- KVRAF
- 1869 posts since 21 Feb, 2004 from somewhere! anywhere!
this is a real gem! as wopelka says there's something 'wobbly' going on in the instruments, but i quite like that because it makes it somehow more immediate, and an intriguing listen , i hope it won't lose that when you redo it. there's some great psychedelic synths sounds. it makes me think of slapp happy's first album which featured faust as backing musicians.
i'll have to investigate the sebastian schuller cd.
regards
i'll have to investigate the sebastian schuller cd.
regards
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1349 posts since 12 Jan, 2003 from Paris
Thanks a lot knockman
Much apreciated feedbacks !
I've uploaded a v3 (same link)
http://ixox.net/Ixox_ItsAllGone.mp3
I've redone the guitare which now should be more in sync and i've reworked a little the mix.
Thanks again for the feedbacks !
Xavier
Much apreciated feedbacks !
I've uploaded a v3 (same link)
http://ixox.net/Ixox_ItsAllGone.mp3
I've redone the guitare which now should be more in sync and i've reworked a little the mix.
Thanks again for the feedbacks !
Xavier
- KVRAF
- 3265 posts since 22 Sep, 2003 from under the sun
the link doesn't work here.Ixox wrote:Thanks a lot knockman
Much apreciated feedbacks !
I've uploaded a v3 (same link)
http://ixox.net/Ixox_ItsAllGone.mp3
I've redone the guitare which now should be more in sync and i've reworked a little the mix.
Thanks again for the feedbacks !
Xavier
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1349 posts since 12 Jan, 2003 from Paris
At the last moment i heard something i could not leave...Wopelka wrote:the link doesn't work here.
Back in 10 minutes...
- KVRAF
- 4146 posts since 10 Oct, 2002 from Nashville, TN USA
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1349 posts since 12 Jan, 2003 from Paris
Thanks for your feedback...
I expected to have feedbacks saying the song goes too high for my voice...
It seems to work globaly but i know it is a little out of tune in the higher notes (in the chorus).
I expected to have feedbacks saying the song goes too high for my voice...
It seems to work globaly but i know it is a little out of tune in the higher notes (in the chorus).