I just finished this track. Let me know what you think.
Lonesome Soul-
http://www.15megsoffame.com/artist/2058/The-Ron-Factor
btw- for those that may notice, I am no longer going by "JediNight"... It was just a temporary name until I Decided on one I liked enough to keep.
Lonesome Soul - New Track
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suburban grilla suburban grilla https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=31256
- KVRian
- 636 posts since 29 Jun, 2004 from dogbed
I guess this isn't my usual kind of thing, but I really liked this, especially the vox. Quite eerie in parts.
nice one
grilla
nice one
grilla
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 64 posts since 18 Oct, 2004
thank yousuburban grilla wrote:I guess this isn't my usual kind of thing, but I really liked this, especially the vox. Quite eerie in parts.
nice one
grilla
Keep the comments coming guys. I can ALWAYS use the input.
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- KVRist
- 261 posts since 31 Oct, 2003
Hey!
Great tune!
The only thing is.. DRUMS, at the beginning and in the mid section.. a little too much reverb for my taste and maybe a little hmmmm... unpredictable?
anyway , nice
Great tune!
The only thing is.. DRUMS, at the beginning and in the mid section.. a little too much reverb for my taste and maybe a little hmmmm... unpredictable?
anyway , nice
snareSpanker
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- KVRian
- 697 posts since 2 Dec, 2002 from northern germany
nice tune, i like the singing, and the drumtrack is great, really nice
but you got a little mad on the reverb, and the voice could need more presence and power, especially when the guitars set in it gets rather drowned.
but the composition is great, really
but you got a little mad on the reverb, and the voice could need more presence and power, especially when the guitars set in it gets rather drowned.
but the composition is great, really
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- KVRAF
- 1869 posts since 21 Feb, 2004 from somewhere! anywhere!
nice dynamics and drive, subtly motoric almost. i guess it's a trfle trite to compare it to pj harvey but there's also something perhaps a little siouxsie and the banshees/killing joke about the drum guitar power and i don't object to the wash of reverb in this case.
regards
but there's also something perhaps a little siouxsie and the banshees/killing joke about the drum guitar power and i don't object to the wash of reverb in this case.regards
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 64 posts since 18 Oct, 2004
I'm not entirely sure I follow... what do you mean by unpredictable? further elaboration would be appreciated, please.snareSpanker wrote:Hey!
Great tune!
The only thing is.. DRUMS, at the beginning and in the mid section.. a little too much reverb for my taste and maybe a little hmmmm... unpredictable?
anyway , nice
Thank you for the input everyone... feel free to keep it comin'.
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- KVRAF
- 10588 posts since 13 Jun, 2004 from Alberto Balsam
IMO you should drop the drops until the guitar comes in (which seems to me a bit too loud). And replace whatever is doing the xylophone-ish thing with maybe something a bit sharper?
Like I said all IMO though . I do completely different genres.
Like I said all IMO though
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- Fearer of cheese
- 3216 posts since 12 Mar, 2002 from UK
This is good stuff 
My only criticism is the drums are a bit too loud before the guitar kicks in.
Now on my second listen, this really is good
My only criticism is the drums are a bit too loud before the guitar kicks in.Can't agree with Chase on this one, the sound contrasts nicely, mind you, I do like extreme sound/mood changes in songs.Chase wrote:And replace whatever is doing the xylophone-ish thing with maybe something a bit sharper?
Now on my second listen, this really is good
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