my first jap drama/anime style composition + 2 ambient ones

[dxl]

the track is called
"be asleep" with japanese relaxing drama/anime flavor

stream:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3 ... 60824&q=Hi
download:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/download ... ID=2560824
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~thank you for ur time ~


it still needs quite a lots work... or 50% rework.... i suppose
overall, i like it and and i hate it
flute will be re recoreded for sure
piano part will needed to be revised
the pizz part..... i started to hate it, but right now i donno what to do with it... couldnt get it to sound more more dyamic ...with that repeating melody as part of the drums


"the moving emotions" is another one i hate so i didnt upload on to my soundclick, it's a relaxing melodic track
with acustic drums + piano+soft pads and leads
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3 ... 60875&q=Hi
coz it just doesnt flow...


"what do i like" is a ambient/downtempo track with arabic flavor
with sitar/ deep pads/ toms. a dark relaxing track... it flows!
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3 ... 60890&q=Hi

comments?any comments? suggestions?

[Genetic_Junk]

Be asleep: Good foundation. Everything sounds pretty good except the flute. Well you already know what to do with it. Some of the timing on the piano sounds off, but over all the piece is relaxing, and with some crisping up would achieve some kind of high standard