Cover: Against All Odds
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 603 posts since 14 Mar, 2002
I recently picked a MIDI file of "Against All Odds" and worked with it... I can't sing, so I asked a friend of mine to do some vocals...
This is, waht she came up with...: Against All Odds
She works with a simple soundblaster card, a cheap Sure micro and Magix Music Maker and her talent. All the vocal bits were her idea...
What do you think? I love her voice!
This is, waht she came up with...: Against All Odds
She works with a simple soundblaster card, a cheap Sure micro and Magix Music Maker and her talent. All the vocal bits were her idea...
What do you think? I love her voice!
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- KVRAF
- 13090 posts since 14 Nov, 2000 from Hannover / Germany
She's got potential for sure.
But there's quite some intonation problems, which gets pretty much noticeable during the doublings and the two part voicings.
Also, I think you should really do a better backing in case you wanted this to be anything more but a demo for "Tanzmucke" stuff.
And of course you should get her recorded through a decent mic setting.
But there's quite some intonation problems, which gets pretty much noticeable during the doublings and the two part voicings.
Also, I think you should really do a better backing in case you wanted this to be anything more but a demo for "Tanzmucke" stuff.
And of course you should get her recorded through a decent mic setting.
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- KVRAF
- 7809 posts since 24 Feb, 2003 from Earth, USA
To my ears, it sounds like she's singing slightly flat most of the time. Some pitch correction may help.
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- Boss Lovin' DR
- 12620 posts since 15 Mar, 2002 from the grimness of yorkshire
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- KVRist
- 333 posts since 18 Aug, 2004
Sascha's right - there's definitely some potential there, you can hear some very good qualities to her voice, which could certainly come out with more practice.
IMHO the "squeezed" start to every line (emotion?) gets really old really quickly. Don't take that as too negative, it's just my opinion.
IMHO the "squeezed" start to every line (emotion?) gets really old really quickly. Don't take that as too negative, it's just my opinion.
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- KVRAF
- 13090 posts since 14 Nov, 2000 from Hannover / Germany
Me toodonkey tugger wrote:Hmm, t'lass is trying, but I still prefer my version
How comes I missed that before?
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- KVRist
- 333 posts since 18 Aug, 2004
Quality!
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- KVRAF
- 1906 posts since 5 Feb, 2005 from UK - Stafford/Lancaster (uni)
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- KVRAF
- 1531 posts since 2 Jun, 2003
I understand the criticisms above, but I liked her voice quite a bit. I thought the pitch was fine when she wasn't doubling. I have great pitch, but have, on rare occasions, had problems doubling and / or harmonizing with myself. In my case, it's a monitoring problem... When you are hearing 2 or more of yourself in headphones (as opposed to hearing your voice resonating in your own head and chest) it can be challenging to sort out what you're hearing and where it's coming from.
If you were producing a song with a harmony guitar lead, you wouldn't want the guitar sound to be exactly the same on both tracks, because it would make it harder for the listener to distinguish the parts. You might use a different pickup setting, different effects, or maybe even a different instrument to make sure the parts were distinct. Vocals need the same distinction, and when multiple tracks are being generated by the same singer, obviously varying the pickup setting and instrument itself are not options.
If she was tracking with the levels near where they were in this mix, there's a chance she would've had trouble hearing both the harmonic content of the song (provided by the piano) and the harmony she was trying to lay down.
Things to try:
1) Have her record with one headphone on and one off.
2) Have her record with the piano and harmony vocal levels turned up, lead vocal turned down.
3) Temporarily EQ and effect the lead vocal so that she can follow the phrasing but not get thrown off by the identical timbre of two of the same instrument playing at once.
Steady On!
EDIT - I almost forgot, she can try panning the lead and harmony vocals. Any vocals already recorded should go to one side and the track currently being laid down to the other side. Keep the instrumentation closer to the middle.
If you were producing a song with a harmony guitar lead, you wouldn't want the guitar sound to be exactly the same on both tracks, because it would make it harder for the listener to distinguish the parts. You might use a different pickup setting, different effects, or maybe even a different instrument to make sure the parts were distinct. Vocals need the same distinction, and when multiple tracks are being generated by the same singer, obviously varying the pickup setting and instrument itself are not options.
If she was tracking with the levels near where they were in this mix, there's a chance she would've had trouble hearing both the harmonic content of the song (provided by the piano) and the harmony she was trying to lay down.
Things to try:
1) Have her record with one headphone on and one off.
2) Have her record with the piano and harmony vocal levels turned up, lead vocal turned down.
3) Temporarily EQ and effect the lead vocal so that she can follow the phrasing but not get thrown off by the identical timbre of two of the same instrument playing at once.
Steady On!
EDIT - I almost forgot, she can try panning the lead and harmony vocals. Any vocals already recorded should go to one side and the track currently being laid down to the other side. Keep the instrumentation closer to the middle.
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