New Hip-Hop Style track

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This is my first hip-hop style track. As it's my first I would welcome any advice on the overall production and arrangement of the track. :?

Track at:

http://www.sectionzmusic.com/detail.asp?SZID=19597

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Telferfledge

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I love the drums, much power in them. However, one thing that doesn't fit is the melody, that bell. The arrangement is good, but (in my opinion, and I am far from a seasoned pro) I personally would drop the bell, and replace it with piano. Then arrange the notes for the piano as the melody in it sounds a bit too random. It feels like it is all over the place, but then again this might be an experimental type of Hip hop? If it is then disregard my opinions on the melody. Nice mixing and drum pattern in my opinion though.
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Thanks for listening to the track. I did kind of feel that the "plinky" bell type sounds might affect the the track. I'll try out the idea of substituting it for a piano part.

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