KVR Audio

ahja · Post by **ahja** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 7:39 pm

Hi there. Just looking for some opinions on this new tune I started up this morning. I haven't really written any music lately (I moved), so kinda hard to tell if its good, or just plain crap.

So, if some people could take a listen and see if its worth continueing, that'd be cool. Thanks

Style is unknown... Just groove based electronic 'freestyle?'

http://home.comcast.net/~a_miles604/and ... -take2.mp3

jackson · Post by **jackson** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 7:42 pm

Great beat, but I really don't like the synth parts that come in after 40sec.

ahja · Post by **ahja** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:29 pm

thank you for listening jackson. i wasn't quite sure about those synths towards the end either. guess i'll see if i can take it in a different direction!

if you check back... how do you think the production sounds?

btw.. what part of chicago do you reside?

fateamenabletochange · Tue Jul 05, 2005 12:49 pm

beat is pumping but the synth sounds like a toddlers casio and should be played twice as fast.

jackson · Post by **jackson** » Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:19 am

Ukranian Village/Humbolt Park, and funnily enough after the other reply, grew up in New Zealand... Production on the beat sounds pretty clean, good.

OSW · Post by **OSW** » Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:27 am

great beat effects at 0:10-0:20
but it's all i like. it seems u like 70th and you are big fan of vangelis

try to find modern sound

ahja · Post by **ahja** » Wed Jul 06, 2005 10:08 pm

I've never actually heard 70th, or vangelis... to be honest.

but, ok... thanks for listening. the synths gotta go.

looking for bias opinion on track start, please