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Hey all,

Just uploaded a song called "Through the Gate (First Circle of Hell)". It's meant to be the first chapter in a cycle of songs about a journey through the layers of hell (think Dante's Inferno). As such, it's meant to convey tension and a taste of what's to come without being too over-the-top.

** edit ** You can't directly click the links, you'll need to copy-paste 'em. Sorry about that.

Hi-Fi
http://www.songplanet.com/artists/play. ... =song_hifi

DL
http://www.songplanet.com/artists/downl ... =song_hifi

Lo-Fi
http://www.songplanet.com/artists/play. ... =song_lofi

Comments, criticisms, pleas for my immortal soul are welcome.

Thanks,
Jer
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Copied the D/L link and pasted to my address bar but got an 'invalid song' message from SongPlanet. :?
Sorry - I tried.
May check back later, see if you've fixed it. :wink:
ERROR! invalid song_id (88 83)

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Man, technology hates me today...

Yeah, I tried the DL and it didn't work for me either... However, the hi-fi and lo-fi work, try those and let me know.

Thanks,
Jer
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OK, heard it now, but I'll leave it for others to comment cos I'm not really into this soundscapey stuff.
Clever and all, some good sounds but doesn't really rock my boat purely on the grounds of personal taste. :wink:

Others will follow I'm sure, with constructive reviews. The ambi-scape crew will love this.
The title does seem to represent the sounds - but I was expecting something different for some reason. :)

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Scary. Droning. Ambiental. No melody lines, but still quite good. If you get at least a bit more generous on the melody/harmony, it will match my style a bit more :D
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Thanks for the feedback!

@Glassback: I can understand the personal taste thing, thanks for taking a listen anyways. Yeah, I was going for what's probably a little more of an abstract sound than what's common, so your comments there are taken as a success for me. :)

@Spion: I'm sure we can get a style we're both happy with for a collab. Like I said, I'm a musical 'ho and down for almost anything. :D
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Any other comments? On composition, sound design, mastering, etc.?

Regardless of whether you think it sucks or love it, I am looking for feedback that will help me develop as an artist.

So... lemme have it!!! :x
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