saturday night, sunday morning 2
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- KVRAF
- 4074 posts since 28 Apr, 2004
cool tune bernard, really has a kind of paranoid feeling.
the bass line is very cool and has a really nice tone. the little noises are nice, i particularly like it where the distored delayed vox feedsback and then becomes a little synth line. nice.
my only critism is that it may be a little busy at times and i would personally give a few of the parts more oom to breathe. thats just personal taste though.
nice job, i'm glad i sleep better than you
steve.
the bass line is very cool and has a really nice tone. the little noises are nice, i particularly like it where the distored delayed vox feedsback and then becomes a little synth line. nice.
my only critism is that it may be a little busy at times and i would personally give a few of the parts more oom to breathe. thats just personal taste though.
nice job, i'm glad i sleep better than you
steve.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1262 posts since 15 Feb, 2003 from Up the Pennine way
Cheers steve.
Did that on headphones cose it was late.
Thanks for the input, yes too busy.
But you have given me some ideas, a la Zappa!
Just updated it and think this is better but I need to do more. Same link.
Hope this is better anyway's.
fake
You cant beat people up then have them say "I love you"
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- addled muppet weed
- 105849 posts since 26 Jan, 2003 from through the looking glass
missed the forst mix,but i like what im hearing here
sort of dubby dancehall wierdness,yep we likes
sort of dubby dancehall wierdness,yep we likes
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- KVRAF
- 3299 posts since 7 May, 2004 from Athens, Greece
I like it too fake, esp. the weird vocal parts. The paranoia is surely there. I'd cut the beats at some points to make other elemnts stand out but that's just me.
If I go insane, please don't put your wires in my brain
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1262 posts since 15 Feb, 2003 from Up the Pennine way
Thanks guys!
Comments much appreciated and noted.
I'm putting this on hold for a bit and will have a good listen again in a few days.
I allready have some ides, it's part way there but in need of some work.
Cheers again.
fake
You cant beat people up then have them say "I love you"