[mully - now with vocals] okay the beer helped
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
Well after almost giving up and several vocal takes ...I took a break, had some of those suggested beers (not bears) and tried it again.... I guess I kinda like what has come out... but am not sure yet... - time will tell....
so here's your chance to listen to this days work
Break Out (now with vocals)
I honestly hope you like it... for that could force me to start with the next song
thanks for the beer advice
cheers,
mully
so here's your chance to listen to this days work
Break Out (now with vocals)
I honestly hope you like it... for that could force me to start with the next song
thanks for the beer advice
cheers,
mully
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- KVRAF
- 2565 posts since 30 Mar, 2004 from Phoenix AZ USA
It sounds great to me.
I do feel however there is something missing.
Something like a better ending and something in the middle like a bridge or an instrumental solo.
I do feel however there is something missing.
Something like a better ending and something in the middle like a bridge or an instrumental solo.
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
thanks.... well I think if the vocals are good I'm gonna move on to the next one though.... I've already worked too long on this song and I kinda like it the way it is now
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- KVRian
- 1103 posts since 19 Apr, 2004 from Trent Severn WaterWay
hey multree, hows it goin,
like the way you start right into the tune,
nice quick strumming soon after, everybodies with ya
vocal control is better than ever!!!
sufficiently breathless,
captured Captain Beyonds acoustic album, including the drums
enjoyed here!!!
its your signature style
have a good one....and best of luck
like the way you start right into the tune,
nice quick strumming soon after, everybodies with ya
vocal control is better than ever!!!
sufficiently breathless,
captured Captain Beyonds acoustic album, including the drums
enjoyed here!!!
its your signature style
have a good one....and best of luck
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
great thanksvtx wrote:hey multree, hows it goin,
like the way you start right into the tune,
nice quick strumming soon after, everybodies with ya
vocal control is better than ever!!!
sufficiently breathless,
captured Captain Beyonds acoustic album, including the drums
enjoyed here!!!
its your signature style
have a good one....and best of luck
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- KVRAF
- 3299 posts since 7 May, 2004 from Athens, Greece
Hey that's great mully! Don't wanna put you back to work with this but here's the only suggestion that I have: although your vocal performance is very nice the sound of the vocals seems a bit dull. Seems like they need a bit more sparkle to stand up against the acoustic and cymbals. Some effect (?) in the vocal track is making their sound a bit muddy. Did I say that the performance (voacals, guitar, drums) is great?
Cheers
Cheers
If I go insane, please don't put your wires in my brain
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- KVRAF
- 6596 posts since 21 Jun, 2004 from Secret Underground Hideout
nice job. reminds me of everything. i can't believe you were reluctant to record your voice
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
well I'm a bit unsecure these days but it's not that i don't like my voice it's rather that i have a hard time staying in tune.
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- KVRAF
- 2123 posts since 29 Mar, 2004 from Lincolnshire, UK
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- KVRist
- 78 posts since 27 Feb, 2005
Nice. Somehow reminds me of some of Devin Townsend's less heavy stuff if you've ever heard of him. I agree however that the vocals are lacking a certain crispness.
- AcousticHippie
- Topic Starter
- 4525 posts since 12 Mar, 2003
thanks guys.... I really appreciate your input
oh and to Claudia.. er.. Hellen .. you know who's ment
oh and to Claudia.. er.. Hellen .. you know who's ment