http://dostavka.net.ua/pub/Orloff_Desert_Storm.mp3

I would be most grateful for the skilled technical comments

Nice tune. Sounds like how I imagine an Eastern version of Miami Vice might sound. Quite a lot of high frequency on here. Maybe you might want to reduce that a little.

Hi, seismic1



i agree, I already knew about this defect,
but searching the soundtracks for Miami Vice, i did't find similarities, maybe I don't know much

I was talking about the feeling I got from the track. Musically they are quite different, and your track is much more modern

Wow. That is really cool. I'd have to agree about the high end, and it seemed like it got a little repetitive. But.....I could picture Liquid Tension Experiment or Dream Theater doing something like that with some killer guitar in it. And in my book, if you get compared to what they do, your on the right track.
Keep it up. Really nice:)

Hi, Vulcandj, thanks for your interesting comment and comparison, I did not know about the existence of Liquid Tension Experiment and Dream Theater's, thanks
my track turned out absolutely spontaneous, I do not want to pursue any style, i love east melodies

Very cool track! The mix is very busy, but it works in this context to create kind of a groove mat

I agree there's too much energy in the top end though, it doesn't sound harsh (and it would on this system, very sensitive to that kind of thing), but it gets tiring fairly quickly.

It does perhaps drag on a bit, some kind of breakdown or similar to change up the pace wouldn't be a bad idea.

Hi, Programentalist, thanks for your comment you think, need to reduce the pace?