Indecent - black ghöst
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2628 posts since 30 Mar, 2007 from In and Out Burger
an upbeat track with my own vox + some rock and pop and ambient elements
http://k003.kiwi6.com/hotlink/9168n5yf6 ... ghoest.mp3
~Brendan
http://k003.kiwi6.com/hotlink/9168n5yf6 ... ghoest.mp3
~Brendan
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 2628 posts since 30 Mar, 2007 from In and Out Burger
bump bump bump
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- D.H. MOD
- 16412 posts since 21 Jun, 2008
I mostly like this. Maybe harsh in the highs here too (this could just be my hearing and setup). Also, it seems like it could stretch out a bit. All in all, though, nicely done, and if you hadn't specifically asked for critical feedback I'd probably have just said, "I enjoyed it." And so I did. So, thanks.
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- KVRist
- 125 posts since 26 Nov, 2011 from Minneapolis, MN
I really like beat, synths, etc. The only part I would change is the main vocal, but it is probably because I like more digital or dirty sounding stuff. The vocal is to clean for me, at least against that musical background. I found myself wanting to through some sort of distortion effect, or vocoder on the main vocal. Personal desires aside though, I thought it was a nice track.
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- KVRAF
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- 2628 posts since 30 Mar, 2007 from In and Out Burger
i will definitely look into those highs... i think i'm gonna need to suck it up and get some monitors even tho i really dont want to spend the money (or more so, my girlfriend doesnt want me to spend the money! haha)D.H. Miltz wrote:I mostly like this. Maybe harsh in the highs here too (this could just be my hearing and setup). Also, it seems like it could stretch out a bit. All in all, though, nicely done, and if you hadn't specifically asked for critical feedback I'd probably have just said, "I enjoyed it." And so I did. So, thanks.
i'm glad that you enjoyed it! thanks for listening D.H.
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- KVRAF
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- 2628 posts since 30 Mar, 2007 from In and Out Burger
thanks! i may play around with the vocals a bit and see what i can come up with. perhaps even just on the second half of the song, adding some dirt and grit to to vox may take it to that level...PaleBlueDot wrote:I really like beat, synths, etc. The only part I would change is the main vocal, but it is probably because I like more digital or dirty sounding stuff. The vocal is to clean for me, at least against that musical background. I found myself wanting to through some sort of distortion effect, or vocoder on the main vocal. Personal desires aside though, I thought it was a nice track.
great feedback! much appreciated!
~Brendan
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