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ELECTRO Housey track!! Would like some honest technical feedback!!!!
gpham86
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:23 am reply with quote
Would appreciate some feedback on my 2nd song I made! Been at this for 4 months. Still lots to learn on the creative/technical side. I would like some more technical feedback from other producers, my friends just say cool song bro


http://soundcloud.com/hypham/calvin-harris-lets-go-remix
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:34 am reply with quote
Really good mate!
But you might wanna consider turning the bass up when the drop comes, as although the kicks are great the bassline isn't present enough to really get you going (imo). But apart from that it's a very decent track.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 17, 2012 12:58 pm reply with quote
Really nice! However, I think u can add a little bit energy to the track, maybe a little more white noise and high the volume of the bass. But overall, it is really good:)
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:02 am reply with quote
I can only agree with what's already been said.

I don't know what parts are yours and what parts are from the original, but overall it sounds good, especially for a 2nd track!

Perhaps concentrate on EQ a little more to help give each part it's own space in the mix. Also I think that you could utilise sidechaining a bit more to add extra pump and energy, which is a big part of that electro/house sound.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:01 am reply with quote
Nice track Tim...love the moody intro ...the arpeggios are interesting touch..shake it shake it shake that thing move move move that thing...Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2012 3:08 pm reply with quote
THANK YOU ALL! You guys have been very helpful, definitely taking your advice and making it better! Time to get to work! =)
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