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Hi guys,

I just wrote this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8kBru1EZg6U

what do you guys think? comments appreciated :)

- Jesse
Last edited by Jesse Gorter on Wed Dec 05, 2012 5:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Good track, Jesse. This has a nice melodic progression which seems to radiate a feeling of sadness. It feels to me like soundtrack material, maybe for a romantic tragedy set in the 1920s or thereabouts.

Good work :)

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Hi,

ooh a romantic tragedy of 1920...<3
I love the idea :)

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Yes, definitely a sweeping cinematic vibe loaded with drama - nice work!
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let's notify hollywood then!

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It started out really good, sounds like it came right out of a movie. My only remark would be that it misses a bit fullness, personally I think it could use a bit more low end. Other than that, nice work!

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Hey I think you are right :)

Here's part two btw:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gYXznjjhpkY

enjoy :)

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That's a delight, very nice work and I enjoyed the sort of celtic vibe to it. :)
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really nice work!

love it =)

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daggdroppe wrote:really nice work!

love it =)
Thanks!

Poly: I didn't notice the Celtic vibe.....cool!

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Is that a bad note about 1:27 or so, or was that on purpose? It was distracting enough for me to post. Whenever I play notes like that I like to play them twice, louder the second time, so that the listener knows that it's supposed to be that way.

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Nice composition you have here Jesse!

The intro has this unpredictable quality to it that keeps the listener interested. Then it sounds like you're improvising later on..even some 'blue' notes...and to keep it interesting you change keys...and back to the intro....more key changes...

Sweet!

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ghettosynth wrote:Is that a bad note about 1:27 or so, or was that on purpose? It was distracting enough for me to post. Whenever I play notes like that I like to play them twice, louder the second time, so that the listener knows that it's supposed to be that way.

The 'bad' note is on purpose ;-)
And playing them twice wouldn't work :) in classical music this happens all the time contrary to popmusic

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Here's the final....tadaa:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjOANrPXGJs

Now it's finished....

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there's a better recording now :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8kBru1EZg6U

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