Octobers - Please help me out with a lyric for this one

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oh and if my website is blocked: My simple javascript to block away unwanted advertisements from godaddy is seen as a virus by most scanners. Buggers

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Love this. Really nice Rhodes tone. Pretty progression. Nice choice of sounds uncluttered. I seem to get carried away.

Nice! O-@

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You mean just the writing or singing too? Because you usually sing...

Although I really love this!
If you just want lyrics...I'm not much of a writer but I'll give an attempt - if you don't like them, scrap'em, if you do, you're welcome to use them.

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Vocal recording planned for saturday (or hopefully sooner if possible)

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I find it hard to believe you can't come up with the lyrics. You single handedly kept the lyric thread going for a long time.

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:-) Forgot! thanks. Perhaps this will be nice:


I can no longer hold it in so I am opening
This heart, the only bridge where I'll find hope within.
And if I see a rainbow followed by comet trails
I will mail you a heartbeat, through songs in it's sails
The deepest dreamery. Pigments painted peacefully
Across the tattered shattered water splattered scenery.
Ill show you

Worlds

You taught me how a hollow heart would fall apart
Left me to my medley, sang along to my art
Now this box will go blank but the toxins remain
Of a microscopic topic in the cosmic terrain.
And if you can't see inside a light shines for us all!
If you replace it with surrogate lights on the wall
Ill show you

Worlds

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Wrote it with an american artist called pensive

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this is great. the clarity and space in the mix is wonderful and the track itself is lovely. nice one Remmie :tu:

neil.

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