How does this electro track sound?

[mikeyk]

I'm about to send it in to get mastered. What do you guys think of it?

http://soundcloud.com/mikey_k/michael-k ... on/s-k3p4f

[vata44]

I guess I don't like the drastic change in the middle. I know it's kind of a popular thing to do, but for me... it takes away from the nice full and round tones of the synths before.

I am only listening on headphones, but the sound also seems a bit thin in the first half... maybe the mastering people can help with that.

It does have some energy in it though, so that's my positive comment.

[mikeyk]

I guess I don't like the drastic change in the middle. I know it's kind of a popular thing to do, but for me... it takes away from the nice full and round tones of the synths before.

I am only listening on headphones, but the sound also seems a bit thin in the first half... maybe the mastering people can help with that.

It does have some energy in it though, so that's my positive comment.

Thanks for listening! I also agree with you about the second break. I didn't know whether to continue with the energetic melody or just give the people listening to it a break and build it up.

As for the thin sound,when I put a sausage fattener on the master channel to test it out, it was a bigger and fuller sound so I'm expecting the mastering people to fix that part.

Thanks again for the feedback!

[mikeyk]

Anyone else?

[JD Gaffe]

That link doesn't work.

[mikeyk]

That link doesn't work.

Sorry bout that! Here's the updated mastered version

http://soundcloud.com/mikey_k/michael-k ... on/s-k3p4f