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mr.me
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2097 posts since 11 Feb, 2003

Postby mr.me; Sun Jan 20, 2013 8:01 am needing hope

I like to think it's a mellow jazzy thing...but I'm sure I wrong.

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polyslax
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8095 posts since 11 Dec, 2003, from Canada

Postby polyslax; Sun Jan 20, 2013 9:20 am

A little less quirky than some of your arrangements, but no less awesome. The pizz and Wurli-ish combo is a winner, and I love the bass line. :tu:
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seismic1
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7348 posts since 13 Mar, 2009, from UK

Postby seismic1; Sun Jan 20, 2013 11:32 am

This is definitely mellower than some of your other tracks, but still recognisably mr.me. The pizzicato thing definitely says "China" to me. I like the eerie pads that come and go throughout. The bass and drums are actually quite heavy (in a relaxed way). Oh yeah. This mix is nice 'n' clear.

Good work :)
MickGael
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Postby MickGael; Sun Jan 20, 2013 11:47 am

Nice groove! I like the bass line.
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Frantz
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3260 posts since 18 Jul, 2008, from New York

Postby Frantz; Sun Jan 20, 2013 4:33 pm

This is a nice change of pace from the more menacing material. I like the arrangement with different parts popping in and out to keep things interesting. Very enjoyable. :tu:
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layzer
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Postby layzer; Sun Jan 20, 2013 9:48 pm

bravo! :clap: with the others on the bass, solid and clear as were the drums and vocals. enjoyed :x
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Acrobat
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895 posts since 9 Aug, 2004, from Rome, Italy

Postby Acrobat; Mon Jan 21, 2013 7:13 am

The composition itself is very cool and much unheard, I have just some remarks on excessive repeating in lyrics and about the timbres: sounds are not interesting at all and very "General Midi". There's much to do on that side, substituting abused timbres with more fitting ones, IMHO, overall quality would rise abruptly. :) :wink:
mr.me
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2097 posts since 11 Feb, 2003

Postby mr.me; Mon Jan 21, 2013 12:23 pm

Thanks for the feedback and advice.

Acrobat: I'm often guilty repeating vocals, as far as everything else I'll keep it in mind for a remix. :wink:
Mariosprt
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Postby Mariosprt; Mon Jan 21, 2013 1:58 pm

It's mellow yes, and with a fine ambience,
The mix seems a bit dry, maybe it's conscious, specially the hats.
Anyway good style :)
mr.me
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Postby mr.me; Wed Jan 23, 2013 12:07 pm

Mariosprt wrote:It's mellow yes, and with a fine ambience,
The mix seems a bit dry, maybe it's conscious, specially the hats.
Anyway good style :)


Dry indeed, I usually pile on the FX.

Thank you for having a listen. :D

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