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klawire wrote: There really are people from all around the world (Europe, Asia, Americas, Oceania) here!
...and other planets. Truly! 8)
Time is an illusion - lunchtime doubly so.

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Things have been very quiet on the review front, so I will hopefully get things moving.

Note that these are personal opinions only. I have tried to be honest but constructive. Please don't take any criticism personally.

These reviews are in the order my mp3 player queued them up - I think in alphabetical order by track title. There is one .ogg submission that my mp3 player won't play, so I will tackle that separately. Only enough time to review the first 10 tracks. The remainder will follow in due course.

hellfog - Back and Forth
A wonderfully relaxed piece of classical guitar that is well played. The background pads blend beautifully, and the simply played piano adds variety and interest, while being in total keeping with the rest of the track. I really enjoy listening to this - again and again and again.

beanpole - Bedroom Angst
Nice intro, with well recorded acoustic guitars. This then leads into a well-structured pop song. The double-tracked vocals during the verse didn't quite work for me - I think I would have preferred a single well sung track - and the vocals were slightly muddy in the mix. The double tracking and octaving in the chorus does work really well though and creates the "lift" that you would expect. The lyrics are OK, although having a song about having difficulty writing a song is not particularly original and slightly twee. The snare and hats on the drums seem a little weak in the mix (for my taste), and the ending is pretty sudden. Overall though this is a very pleasant listen.

D.H. Miltz - Drift
Creative noodling with weird background noises - definitely unusual. While the laid-back guitar work fits the description of "drift", I found the background noises (the dog in particular) to be very distracting and I couldn't quite work out what the intent was in including them (other than to disturb the drifting). Another very sudden ending. Hard to work this one out, and I didn't really connect with it as a result.

bzur - Morning Bells
Great piano work in this one, with little trills and great dynamic variation and touch. The bells work in harmony with the piano nicely, and the other instrumentation is beautifully arranged and mixed. This is a piece that embraces you, destresses you and carries you away floating into another more relaxed world. I like the way it builds throughout, and then lets you down gently at the end. Simply great stuff.

Land of Trees - Broodkillphill
One of the more bizarre tracks this month - definitely creatively original. Sounds like a string ensemble got caught in a short-circuiting electrical cabinet on a space ship. It's not something that I would have queued up for repeated listening, but I could imagine this working as theme music for some cop show/thriller/urban drama with violence involved.....

Klawire - One Way Out
Interesting to see a number of orchestral tracks submitted this month - perhaps a potential theme for a future contest? This piece builds to a nice crescendo at the end, but in the early parts (up to about 1:20) is let down somewhat by string parts that aren't quite dramatic or emotive enough to carry the piece, and don't quite fit with the dramatic drum sounds that build behind it - and the guitar doesn't really fit in the mix either - particularly right at the start. From 1:20 onwards however, this is a really strong piece. The choir adds strength and humanity, and the faster string parts fit much more comfortably with the dramatic percussion. I could listen to those last 45 seconds over and over again....

shangsean - Pain
Another more experimental piece. It really is great to see the variety that this contest produces. I like the way this one builds, and then drops out about 1:40. There is an interesting blend of sounds and instruments. Not perhaps quite as painful as the title might suggest - for me it more brings out mental and visual images of slavery to the industrial era - a wasteland of large factories full of noise, smoke and dust - eventually collapsing into oblivion. Good stuff.

kryptonaut - Retrospective 2012
Full of luscious bass playing and polyrhythms, this one is definitely on continuous repeat. I love the way this starts out simply and builds in complexity and interest as it goes on before relaxing into the end. The contrapuntal keyboard sounds interplay wonderfully with each other - and that bass playing.....yum! A crisp clear mix with everything beautifully distinct. Masterful stuff.

ClaRago - Roundabout Waltz
When this first started I got all excited - let's have me some jaaaaaaazzz! Nice jazzy piano chords and complex jazzy drum rhythms hint at wonderfulness to come. However it turns out that this isn't quite as jazzy as I thought it would be. Sure there are some good jazz chords in here, but everything is QUANTISED - EEK! And there is too much "on the beat" playing towards the end - nowhere near enough complexity and syncopation. There is none of that improvisational jazzy feel. After a promising start, the drums (which otherwise are excellent) are overpowered by a repetive motif played on the ride cymbal that just ain't jazz. Very promising, but not quite there yet.

spirulence - Space Explorer
This has a cool groove to it, and a gorgeous sub bass. Well structured and interesting and with a good mix. I enjoy the laid back feel and the warm sounds that just beg you to close your eyes and drift away with the music. This stands up to repeated listening. Very enjoyable indeed.

My $0.02
Time is an illusion - lunchtime doubly so.

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IrionDaRonin wrote:Hi buddies.

Just wondering if i could upload the track in 320 kbps. There is no more rules about this?
And what will be the challenge the next month?

Have a nice day :)
Hi, Irion.

At least for now I've removed the 192 kbps rule, so you can indeed upload the track in 320 kbps.

I'll post next month's theme when I lock the submissions thread in about 18 hours.
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Thanks for the review(s), slartibartfast.
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Anyone having trouble due to the quality limit being lifted? If so, speak up.

I'm managing okay even with dial-up, so barring widespread complaints I think I'll keep the limit lifted (if theres's a month with a longer time limit as part of the theme the limit would probably be reinstated for that month). But it's still open for discussion.
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@Irion

VSTis used
·U-he Zebra 2

What a surprise !!! :wink:

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D.H. Miltz wrote:Anyone having trouble due to the quality limit being lifted? If so, speak up.

I'm managing okay even with dial-up, so barring widespread complaints I think I'll keep the limit lifted (if theres's a month with a longer time limit as part of the theme the limit would probably be reinstated for that month). But it's still open for discussion.
No problems here, just a request: is it possible to replace my 192Kbps entry with the 320Kbps version? At first I didn't read about the new rule, so I uploaded both versions on souncloud.

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slartibartfast wrote:
bzur - Morning Bells
Great piano work in this one, with little trills and great dynamic variation and touch. The bells work in harmony with the piano nicely, and the other instrumentation is beautifully arranged and mixed. This is a piece that embraces you, destresses you and carries you away floating into another more relaxed world. I like the way it builds throughout, and then lets you down gently at the end. Simply great stuff.
Thanks for the nice feedback :)

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bzur wrote:No problems here, just a request: is it possible to replace my 192Kbps entry with the 320Kbps version? At first I didn't read about the new rule, so I uploaded both versions on souncloud.
Sure, that's fine.
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slartibartfast wrote:Things have been very quiet on the review front, so I will hopefully get things moving.


hellfog - Back and Forth
A wonderfully relaxed piece of classical guitar that is well played. The background pads blend beautifully, and the simply played piano adds variety and interest, while being in total keeping with the rest of the track. I really enjoy listening to this - again and again and again.

Thank You, glad you liked it.


Here a couple of more acoustic tracks, only acoustic guitar here.
https://soundcloud.com/psyerichybrid/sets/acoustic-116

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Phew... barely made it... work has been crazy this past couple of months, but I figured I couldn't miss the first Free For All in the D.H. Miltz era, could I? (who knows when the next is gonna be :hihi: )

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Submissions thread is locked, voting thread is up.

For next month, a broadened version of a suggestion from kryptonaut:
This month you are asked to submit an entry with two sections or movements. The sections should represent related concepts (e.g., the old year and the new; night and morning; climbing and being climbed).
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@broodkillphill:
really nice string samples!! where are those from?

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Damn there are many submissions! Wish there were less so I'd have time to give detailed reviews, now I guess I can only place them in my order of preference and that's it...

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klawire wrote:Damn there are many submissions!
Not really. In the past there have been months of 60 or so submissions.

The thing I was going to "Damn" about is the graphics talent. I'll have to supply a high quality visual on my submission next time.

Victor.

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