http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Bx5DnUXgCg
Hey guys I am very new and would love to get as much input as possible. If you would like to talk and share techniques please add me to facebook!
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Let me know what you think!
My first song ever, please help!
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 13 posts since 19 Jan, 2013
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- KVRist
- 349 posts since 5 Nov, 2012
I love it, but then I'm sucker for tribal beats 
I think you have a little "mastering problem" -- your main tom tom sound, eventhough having a nice and wide left/right stereo field, is coming over a little muddy.
I would remove the section from ~1:04 to ~2:02 so that the "~2:00 drop mark" starts at the "~1:00 mark" instead -- I jut think that section gets a little too muddy and doesn't really add anything new...
Other than that, good work.
The only other friendly suggestion is to perhaps add a little 'High Freq Sizzle' -- some eq'd hit-hats, a "clave" of some kind -- this should help give you another element to play with the arrangement as well as "fill out the spectrum".
Again, I listened all the through == good work
I think you have a little "mastering problem" -- your main tom tom sound, eventhough having a nice and wide left/right stereo field, is coming over a little muddy.
I would remove the section from ~1:04 to ~2:02 so that the "~2:00 drop mark" starts at the "~1:00 mark" instead -- I jut think that section gets a little too muddy and doesn't really add anything new...
Other than that, good work.
The only other friendly suggestion is to perhaps add a little 'High Freq Sizzle' -- some eq'd hit-hats, a "clave" of some kind -- this should help give you another element to play with the arrangement as well as "fill out the spectrum".
Again, I listened all the through == good work
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 13 posts since 19 Jan, 2013
thanks, this is the kind of advice i need. 
