YAF telescopes
- Narcissistic Messiah
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- 4562 posts since 8 Apr, 2002 from https://soundcloud.com/remcoh
Constellations laughed
We stood under neon
The observer effects
Took place over eons
Fingers fiddled on focus
Dew dripped and reflected
Once we were Gods
Now we stand corrected
www.youreallfree.com/music/YAF_telescopes.mp3
We stood under neon
The observer effects
Took place over eons
Fingers fiddled on focus
Dew dripped and reflected
Once we were Gods
Now we stand corrected
www.youreallfree.com/music/YAF_telescopes.mp3
- KVRAF
- 6325 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
I like those lyrics. Too bad you didn't use them in the track.
- KVRAF
- 1793 posts since 9 Apr, 2011
Same here, especially the last two lines. I do like the laid-back, almost exotic vibe of the actual song though. The only thing I'd say in criticism is that some sections of the arpeggios seem a bit off, like they don't quite gel with the background chords.
"musician."
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- Narcissistic Messiah
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- 4562 posts since 8 Apr, 2002 from https://soundcloud.com/remcoh
nineofkings wrote:Same here, especially the last two lines. I do like the laid-back, almost exotic vibe of the actual song though. The only thing I'd say in criticism is that some sections of the arpeggios seem a bit off, like they don't quite gel with the background chords.
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Thanks for listening buddy
The slightly detuned arpeggios were meant to give a disjoninted feel
Looks like i overdid it
exotic ... mmmmm must have been been my mood
- KVRAF
- 8181 posts since 22 Sep, 2008 from Windsor. UK
Brilliant work once again.
Personally I love the arps and the way they moved in and out of the expected.
Brilliant sound choice and perfect drums.
Clever bastard
Personally I love the arps and the way they moved in and out of the expected.
Brilliant sound choice and perfect drums.
Clever bastard
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- KVRAF
- 2645 posts since 21 Jul, 2004
yep! i love the drifty feel of this and the insistent yet delicate flow.tehlord wrote:
Clever bastard
another great piece Remmie
neil.
- KVRAF
- 1793 posts since 9 Apr, 2011
Not at all, I liked the detunedness, it was just some of the notes seemed to hang away from the other instruments, making it - well, disjointed actually. On second thought, it does exactly what it's meant to.Emerald Tablet wrote: The slightly detuned arpeggios were meant to give a disjoninted feel
Looks like i overdid it
"musician."
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- KVRAF
- 5530 posts since 5 Aug, 2006 from UK - The Mudway Towns
What can I say? It all flows perfectly to me
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!
- Narcissistic Messiah
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- 4562 posts since 8 Apr, 2002 from https://soundcloud.com/remcoh
Thanks sir )folderol wrote:What can I say? It all flows perfectly to me
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nineofkings wrote:Not at all, I liked the detunedness, it was just some of the notes seemed to hang away from the other instruments, making it - well, disjointed actually. On second thought, it does exactly what it's meant to.Emerald Tablet wrote: The slightly detuned arpeggios were meant to give a disjoninted feel
Looks like i overdid it
I think youre right!
On to the next
hug
- KVRAF
- 4784 posts since 2 Sep, 2005 from city of lights (nl)
Beautiful tune, I love the drift/detune. Totally mesmerizing theme.
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Thanks sir!core wrote:Beautiful tune, I love the drift/detune. Totally mesmerizing theme.