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Constellations laughed
We stood under neon
The observer effects
Took place over eons
Fingers fiddled on focus
Dew dripped and reflected
Once we were Gods
Now we stand corrected

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I like those lyrics. Too bad you didn't use them in the track.

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Same here, especially the last two lines. I do like the laid-back, almost exotic vibe of the actual song though. The only thing I'd say in criticism is that some sections of the arpeggios seem a bit off, like they don't quite gel with the background chords.

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nineofkings wrote:Same here, especially the last two lines. I do like the laid-back, almost exotic vibe of the actual song though. The only thing I'd say in criticism is that some sections of the arpeggios seem a bit off, like they don't quite gel with the background chords.

Heyyyy wonderguy! :-)
Thanks for listening buddy

The slightly detuned arpeggios were meant to give a disjoninted feel
Looks like i overdid it :-)

exotic ... mmmmm must have been been my mood

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Brilliant work once again.

Personally I love the arps and the way they moved in and out of the expected.

Brilliant sound choice and perfect drums.

Clever bastard :D

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tehlord wrote:
Clever bastard :D
yep! i love the drifty feel of this and the insistent yet delicate flow.

another great piece Remmie :)

neil.

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that's really cool! I'd love to hear it with a vocal ;-)

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Emerald Tablet wrote: The slightly detuned arpeggios were meant to give a disjoninted feel
Looks like i overdid it :-)
Not at all, I liked the detunedness, it was just some of the notes seemed to hang away from the other instruments, making it - well, disjointed actually. On second thought, it does exactly what it's meant to.

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What can I say? It all flows perfectly to me :hail:
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!

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folderol wrote:What can I say? It all flows perfectly to me :hail:
Thanks sir :-))

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nineofkings wrote:
Emerald Tablet wrote: The slightly detuned arpeggios were meant to give a disjoninted feel
Looks like i overdid it :-)
Not at all, I liked the detunedness, it was just some of the notes seemed to hang away from the other instruments, making it - well, disjointed actually. On second thought, it does exactly what it's meant to.

I think youre right!
On to the next :-)

hug

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Beautiful tune, I love the drift/detune. Totally mesmerizing theme. :tu:
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core wrote:Beautiful tune, I love the drift/detune. Totally mesmerizing theme. :tu:
Thanks sir!

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