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ATS · Post by **ATS** » Thu Jan 09, 2014 8:56 pm

New Song "Origin" by Alex Cooper

Will play when you click on the picture or the link (so watch your volume before you press)

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12630802

I am probably going to extend this out into a much longer piece.

jantjie · Post by **jantjie** » Thu Jan 09, 2014 10:35 pm

Hi Alex,

Very nice this one.
You want to extend it. Maybe include a tempo change or scale change.
I listened to your other music. My favorites:
If I could see you now
Song for Mallory
Silver and Black
Forever

What I like about your music are the original melody's (real music) and composition.
What can be better in my humble opinion is that the music sounds a bit "thin". I should say: add some dense, heavy sounds/chords on the background and make the drums denser/heavier.
But, it's a matter of taste of course.

Regards,
Jantjie

ecamburn · Post by **ecamburn** » Fri Jan 10, 2014 3:43 pm

Nice one Alex. That lead entering around :40 is cool. This has a nice, chilled, kind of vintage vibe to it. Really nice melodies and chord progressions. The tune takes you on a nice little trip.

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Sat Jan 11, 2014 5:49 pm

Nice synths and melodies on here. It was a very pleasant listen this evening. It could definitely be extended. Maybe you could vary the dynamics a little to add some variation if you lengthen this.

Good work

ATS · Post by **ATS** » Sat Jan 11, 2014 11:10 pm

Thanks for the great feedback.

I decided to just continue it out in different parts and not change this part at all. I think I will post one part at a time then have the whole thing as one download as well. I'm definitely listening to all the great ideas and advice!!!

"Origin" By Alex Cooper