Need your opinion
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 15 posts since 14 Jan, 2014
Hey everyone,
I posted a new track (PUT YOUR HANDS UP) that I am working on, and would love to get your opinion of the song.
Do you thing its good or bad Track, can you dance to this track at a club or a big event.
I know the track has no real intro or nice ending yet, but this is a work in progress track.
Please let me know what you think.
Thank you
AB1
https://soundcloud.com/ab-1-1
I posted a new track (PUT YOUR HANDS UP) that I am working on, and would love to get your opinion of the song.
Do you thing its good or bad Track, can you dance to this track at a club or a big event.
I know the track has no real intro or nice ending yet, but this is a work in progress track.
Please let me know what you think.
Thank you
AB1
https://soundcloud.com/ab-1-1
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- KVRer
- 6 posts since 2 May, 2013 from Houston
Dude this is good, nice job.
If others don't feel it, it may be a lack of human elements, consider more vocal snippets, I thinks it's great though
If others don't feel it, it may be a lack of human elements, consider more vocal snippets, I thinks it's great though
- KVRian
- 543 posts since 16 Dec, 2003
I think you have a strong start here. The tune has a nice structure. I like your use of dynamics. I found the high pitched "woop" sound to be a little too present in the mix. I also thought you lost a little energy in the section beginning at 1:31. But in general, this was well put together.
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 15 posts since 14 Jan, 2014
Thank you ecamburn, I agree 100% with what your saying. It's funny, my friend had the same exact comment as you . I will work on the mix of the woop sound, although i'm almost thinking of taking it out and maybe put a sweeping woosh sound instead. what do you think?
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- KVRian
- 584 posts since 12 Jul, 2007 from Sweden
I kind of agree as to the woop synth, it gets kind of tedious as a percussive element - maybe let it work less often. Its very polished, all in all. I think youre getting there.
- KVRer
- 29 posts since 27 Mar, 2013 from Canada
I like the track, one minor point that I think might make it bang a little harder (correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm assuming you want a nice dancey track) I would put some sidechaining on the snare when you do the snareroll into the drop, and then I would play with some sidechaining on the kick. That being said, don't just drop sidechaining on it and call it a day, make it evolve with the track, and pick up the sidechaining when you drop your track into the harder parts. You're almost there with this track, I feel like you just need to take it a little further.