Radical Shadows Under a Large Tree (Techno/Electronic)

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https://soundcloud.com/radiantvoid/radi ... er-a-large

Comments/Criticism is appreciated! Thanks

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Let me be honest with you and say the mix doesn't
work for me.
I think the drums need to be much more prominent.
Maybe some suitable compression would help + EQ

At 2.55 the cymbals is taking all the attention.
Try to remove some of the bottom with EQ or
simply lower them.

The music itself is quite interesting and full of
good ideas.
If you get the sound of it more balanced I think
you have fine track.

Cheers :tu:
Sound C loud
Band C amp
Clicks and pops is all I get

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Thanks man!

Was definitely a little nervous about posting this track because it didn't really quite groove the way some of my other stuff has, couldn't quite figure out/fix the problem though. I may try and mess around with it a bit when I get the chance

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I think I'm going to agree with sbj here. The music is definitely interesting, with lots of quirky melodic and harmonic ideas. I like the distorted lead synth and that growling bass. The drums have quite a dry character overall. Maybe adding some reverb to the snare might liven it up a little.

Good work :)

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