work in progress, need some opinions pls -> ->

[annode]

Hi.
Have a rough track sketch, wondering where my problems lie.
Is that snare too compressed and dated?
Does the main arped synth sound too grungy?

The pad chords are just scratched in...will surely change them.
Any comments on the sound?
All other help very welcome.

Thanks much.

https://soundcloud.com/annode-1/technology-composite-01

[astrochimp]

i like it!

but you wanted some ideas:
- i'm not so sure about the beat sound.
- i'd also try some parts without any beats at all or more variety.
- maybe more compression on the main arp to make it a little more constant?

[annode]

- i'm not so sure about the beat sound.
- i'd also try some parts without any beats at all or more variety.

Good advice. I`m killing the beat all together. I don`t do music like this normally. I should stick with the style I do best.