KVR Audio

deltron · Post by **deltron** » Mon Apr 14, 2014 9:56 pm

hi, ive made a song and would really appreciate you guys checking it out and letting me know what you think?

http://soundcloud.com/v-e-e-d/goodbye-cool-world

jethrobull · Post by **jethrobull** » Mon Apr 14, 2014 10:03 pm

I really enjoyed this,its a nice little track.The drums are little bit dull for my tastes but all in all great work!

Rah · Post by **Rah** » Mon Apr 14, 2014 11:26 pm

I like it a lot

I like the filtered synth and rhythmic amplitude modulations

I feel the track could use a third part that goes somewhere new musically. At the moment, it feels like the journey starts well, gets going, but then doesn't 'go anywhere'

ecamburn · Post by **ecamburn** » Tue Apr 15, 2014 1:34 pm

An enjoyable tune that keeps getting better as it goes on IMO. Neat transition at :40. I found the drum programming to be quite unique and enjoyable, though you might try introducing some variation to add interest. The piece ends abruptly, so like Rah suggested you might consider another section or try to bring the end around to a more recognizable conclusion.

deltron · Post by **deltron** » Tue Apr 15, 2014 1:47 pm

cheers thanks a lot for the feedback, much appreciated!

i'd really appreciate some feedback on a song i made