Timeless Downfall [Electronic]
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 91 posts since 14 Feb, 2013 from Germany
Hey guys
I'd like to share my new track 'Timeless Downfall'
I'm not quite sure about the mix, is it too messy like that ?
anyway, i hope you like what you hear !
i appreciate any kind of suggestions, critics etc.
thanks for taking time
https://soundcloud.com/qatarsis/timeless-downfall
cheers
qatarsis
I'd like to share my new track 'Timeless Downfall'
I'm not quite sure about the mix, is it too messy like that ?
anyway, i hope you like what you hear !
i appreciate any kind of suggestions, critics etc.
thanks for taking time
https://soundcloud.com/qatarsis/timeless-downfall
cheers
qatarsis
- KVRian
- 543 posts since 16 Dec, 2003
There were some very nice sounds in this tune. I enjoyed the dark, swampy, brooding vibe. To me the piece comes off mainly as a beat with bass and atmospherics. To my ears, the tune would be more engaging with more melodic content - either lead lines, arps, etc. I really felt that the tempo change at 2:27 pulled down the energy of the tune. An enjoyable listen
- KVRAF
- 11483 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
Definitely an entertaining piece. I liked the dark atmosphere and the sound choices were good. this would be good for OST applications. I think maybe a not-too upfront "thin" lead sound playing a slow dark melodic motif might help this. I dunno, maybe a 'tron string or brass line in the background, just to add even more unease.
Good work
Good work
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 91 posts since 14 Feb, 2013 from Germany
@ecamburn: thanks alot man, really glad to hear that ! i like how you describe the sound with swampy / broody actually
i get your point with the melody, i'll see what i can do, will definitely try to change that or to add some new part with a melody
@seismic: thanks alot man whats an OST application :X ? yeah, i'll see what i can do there, some kind of additional theme / melody / new instrument in general will be good for sure ! the brass line-idea sounds really interesting, i'd like to find a nice fitting sample but thats so hard to find
anyway, thanks for the nice words and suggestion guys, will upload a new version soon here
best regards and happy easter
qatarsis
i get your point with the melody, i'll see what i can do, will definitely try to change that or to add some new part with a melody
@seismic: thanks alot man whats an OST application :X ? yeah, i'll see what i can do there, some kind of additional theme / melody / new instrument in general will be good for sure ! the brass line-idea sounds really interesting, i'd like to find a nice fitting sample but thats so hard to find
anyway, thanks for the nice words and suggestion guys, will upload a new version soon here
best regards and happy easter
qatarsis
- KVRAF
- 11483 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK