This is the HEART...New Cut by PremEyE...feedback is appreciated

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Hello-
I just finished this track today.
I would love to share it with you and get feedback/suggestions if you will be so generous.
I know there are many experienced producers on KVR...
Thanks!
Sincerely,
-Prem

This is the HEART
https://soundcloud.com/premeye/this-is-the-heart

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very nice, personally i don't really like the sound of the bass in the first part.
but the rest is very nice!

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Thanks for listening MaartenP.
It is appreciated.
I am curious...
Can you be more specific on what you did not like about the bass? It would be helpful to my growth...
Sincerely,
Prem

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PremEye wrote:Thanks for listening MaartenP.
It is appreciated.
I am curious...
Can you be more specific on what you did not like about the bass? It would be helpful to my growth...
Sincerely,
Prem
i don't like the sound itself. the "melody" that its playing is good, the modulation is good.
but the sound itself sounds a bit like a cartoon figure failing in something "whah whah whaauuhhww"
personally i'm crazy about "acid" maybe you can change the sound to a acid bass-line?!
than you would end up with something that sounds like a part i have in my latetst track
https://soundcloud.com/maarten-pool/loose-control
@ 1:60 you hear the acid line coming in which sounds pretty cool i.m.o. that would probably also work pretty well with your track. atleast i think so.
and if your at the stage of listening to my track... it's also posted on this forum so maybe you can leave some feedback for my?! XD
but all in all; it's a good track and it's probably just a matter of taste.
and i'm far from a pro so i don't know if any of the feedback is any usefull;)
Grtz

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