German Pop/Rock-Song "Alles was ich tun kann"
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
hi there!
hope you like this! feedback would be appreciated!
https://soundcloud.com/abiuslu/alles-was-ich-tun-kann
have a nice day!
abi
hope you like this! feedback would be appreciated!
https://soundcloud.com/abiuslu/alles-was-ich-tun-kann
have a nice day!
abi
- KVRAF
- 1758 posts since 15 Mar, 2013 from Germany
nice chorus
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
- KVRAF
- 1758 posts since 15 Mar, 2013 from Germany
Did you sing all harmony voices yourself? Did you compose them or did you just sing intuitively?
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
yes, i sang them myself (there are 4 vocal tracks in the bridge and the chorus).
Hm, as composition/improvisation is concerned, i didn´t compose them from some theoretical perspective. trial and error is the best description maybe!
Hm, as composition/improvisation is concerned, i didn´t compose them from some theoretical perspective. trial and error is the best description maybe!
- KVRAF
- 6322 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
Great song! I especially liked the bits of guitar filling in the gaps during the verses. Very tasteful.
Mix wise, I thought the chorus was too jam packed with something happening in all frequencies. I thought it would have been better with a little more space. Perhaps lowering the harmony vox levels might help?
Mix wise, I thought the chorus was too jam packed with something happening in all frequencies. I thought it would have been better with a little more space. Perhaps lowering the harmony vox levels might help?
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
hey frantz!
thanks for your nice comments on the song!
i´ll certainly have to rework the mix, you´re right. it´s not balanced well, i´ll try your suggestion on lowering the volume of the harmony voices, too.
thanks for your nice comments on the song!
i´ll certainly have to rework the mix, you´re right. it´s not balanced well, i´ll try your suggestion on lowering the volume of the harmony voices, too.
- KVRAF
- 6322 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York
Going through your SoundCloud now. This is another solid, powerful tune:
http://soundcloud.com/abiuslu/belki
Well done, sir.
http://soundcloud.com/abiuslu/belki
Well done, sir.
- KVRAF
- 6160 posts since 29 Mar, 2003 from Location: Location
You asked for feedback...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hRu3NFKBkt0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hRu3NFKBkt0
....................Don`t blame me for 'The Roots', I just live here.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
thank you i´ll have to think about this!annode wrote:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hRu3NFKBkt0
Last edited by abi on Fri Jul 25, 2014 12:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
thank you so much! this is the result of a silly broken heart, a few pints of turkish beer and a sick summer heat. all trapped in a room in istanbul with the windows shut in order to be able to record vocals beside the traffic sound i had to learn the solo afterwards, as i couldn´t play more than 2 bars straightly when i was recordingFrantz wrote:Going through your SoundCloud now. This is another solid, powerful tune:
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- KVRist
- 313 posts since 27 Dec, 2011
Hi Abi,
das kann sich echt hören lassen!
Grüße nach Köln
M.
das kann sich echt hören lassen!
Grüße nach Köln
M.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
Hallo Brösel!M.Brösel wrote:Hi Abi,
das kann sich echt hören lassen!
Grüße nach Köln
M.
Vielen Dank und Grüße zurück
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- KVRAF
- 2063 posts since 14 Sep, 2004 from $HOME
"...in der Wüste Eisbär spielen" - Klasse Zeile!
Very catchy song, simple, but extremely memorable chorus, I am a bit envious. Classic German indiepop.
Just some very subjective remarks:
For my taste, the drumming could've been at lot simpler, there's too much happening which detracts from the vocals.
I would maybe try to make the lead vocal louder, I listened to this on my iPad first and had problems understanding the lyrics because the drums were overshadowing (is that an English word?.) the vocals. With headphones it was a bit better, but still, vocals and lyrics are very important here and should be the center of attention.
Grüße aus Bonn!
Very catchy song, simple, but extremely memorable chorus, I am a bit envious. Classic German indiepop.
Just some very subjective remarks:
For my taste, the drumming could've been at lot simpler, there's too much happening which detracts from the vocals.
I would maybe try to make the lead vocal louder, I listened to this on my iPad first and had problems understanding the lyrics because the drums were overshadowing (is that an English word?.) the vocals. With headphones it was a bit better, but still, vocals and lyrics are very important here and should be the center of attention.
Grüße aus Bonn!
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 886 posts since 11 May, 2004 from cologne,germany
Hi fese, thanks for the nice words and helpful comments!fese wrote:"...in der Wüste Eisbär spielen" - Klasse Zeile!
Very catchy song, simple, but extremely memorable chorus, I am a bit envious. Classic German indiepop.
Just some very subjective remarks:
For my taste, the drumming could've been at lot simpler, there's too much happening which detracts from the vocals.
I would maybe try to make the lead vocal louder, I listened to this on my iPad first and had problems understanding the lyrics because the drums were overshadowing (is that an English word?.) the vocals. With headphones it was a bit better, but still, vocals and lyrics are very important here and should be the center of attention.
Grüße aus Bonn!
The mix is indeed not there yet! Hopefully i´ll have the motivation to have another take on it...
As far as drums are concerned, I have totally fallen in love with the logic x drummer. as i only have to move a controller around in order to get the most complex beats, i´m really tempted to often by the new possibilities. less could be more i guess Grüße nach Bonn!
have a nice weekend all!