KVR Audio

mafiaand · Post by **mafiaand** » Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:17 pm

Hi,
I've been working on this for a while.. But it doesnt sound as powerful as I want it to - and I've really run out of ideas of what I should do with it.
What is missing? And what could I do better? And where does the song "irritate" you the most? And where does the mix/mastering go wrong?

Thank you for your help, the song is released. Give it a listen, thanks )))
https://soundcloud.com/kochen/revelation-original

The genre is slow-beat house, or atleast I think it is

Thanks in forward for your help, it's much appreciated!

Andreas Hansen

Btw. if anyone wants to do a collab on anything this style please PM me

Or if someone wants to do some vocals?*edit

arkmabat · Post by **arkmabat** » Mon Oct 20, 2014 3:32 pm

Well, Revelation is spelled wrong for one.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:44 pm

arkmabat wrote:Well, Revelation is spelled wrong for one.

yes, if you spell it right, the power will manifest

mafiaand · Post by **mafiaand** » Mon Oct 20, 2014 8:00 pm

Noted!

English isn't my main language so no worries - and it's still only a SC song, no harm done..
Anything else?

Andreas

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Wed Oct 22, 2014 12:22 am

I thought it almost sounded like Italo Disco, which isn't necessarily bad. the thing I found most noticeable was that the track seemed to lose energy at 2:51, where it underwent some variations to the rhythmic backing. that section may have functioned better as a break before the track ended with a "full-on" variation of the 1:55-2:50 section. Maybe you could also add a slight variation of the melody line to give the ending more impact.

Good work

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed Oct 22, 2014 3:38 am

i think you should work on better sounds. we got a simple epiano, some standard synthy sounds, some fairlightish sounds and that EVER popular swoosh noise married to some typical drums all make for one ho hum track at best. BUT it is mixed good

mafiaand · Post by **mafiaand** » Wed Oct 22, 2014 7:02 pm

Thanks for the comments, guys.
I've decided to add a couple of things to the track and then almost completely removed the reverb from the entire track.
Thanks to you, the track is now finished.

Best regards,
Andreas Hansen

https://soundcloud.com/kochen/revelation-original

(Feel free to give a like or a follow)

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed Oct 22, 2014 7:48 pm

sounds good! i'd call it a done deal!

mafiaand · Post by **mafiaand** » Wed Oct 22, 2014 9:37 pm

@layzer

Revalation | Song is finished, thanks | Slow-melodic House