Revalation | Song is finished, thanks | Slow-melodic House
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 4 posts since 20 Oct, 2014
Hi,
I've been working on this for a while.. But it doesnt sound as powerful as I want it to - and I've really run out of ideas of what I should do with it.
What is missing? And what could I do better? And where does the song "irritate" you the most? And where does the mix/mastering go wrong?
Thank you for your help, the song is released. Give it a listen, thanks )))
https://soundcloud.com/kochen/revelation-original
The genre is slow-beat house, or atleast I think it is
Thanks in forward for your help, it's much appreciated!
Andreas Hansen
Btw. if anyone wants to do a collab on anything this style please PM me Or if someone wants to do some vocals?*edit
I've been working on this for a while.. But it doesnt sound as powerful as I want it to - and I've really run out of ideas of what I should do with it.
What is missing? And what could I do better? And where does the song "irritate" you the most? And where does the mix/mastering go wrong?
Thank you for your help, the song is released. Give it a listen, thanks )))
https://soundcloud.com/kochen/revelation-original
The genre is slow-beat house, or atleast I think it is
Thanks in forward for your help, it's much appreciated!
Andreas Hansen
Btw. if anyone wants to do a collab on anything this style please PM me Or if someone wants to do some vocals?*edit
Last edited by mafiaand on Wed Oct 22, 2014 7:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
yes, if you spell it right, the power will manifestarkmabat wrote:Well, Revelation is spelled wrong for one.
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
- KVRAF
- 11474 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
I thought it almost sounded like Italo Disco, which isn't necessarily bad. the thing I found most noticeable was that the track seemed to lose energy at 2:51, where it underwent some variations to the rhythmic backing. that section may have functioned better as a break before the track ended with a "full-on" variation of the 1:55-2:50 section. Maybe you could also add a slight variation of the melody line to give the ending more impact.
Good work
Good work
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
i think you should work on better sounds. we got a simple epiano, some standard synthy sounds, some fairlightish sounds and that EVER popular swoosh noise married to some typical drums all make for one ho hum track at best. BUT it is mixed good
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 4 posts since 20 Oct, 2014
Thanks for the comments, guys.
I've decided to add a couple of things to the track and then almost completely removed the reverb from the entire track.
Thanks to you, the track is now finished.
Best regards,
Andreas Hansen
https://soundcloud.com/kochen/revelation-original
(Feel free to give a like or a follow)
I've decided to add a couple of things to the track and then almost completely removed the reverb from the entire track.
Thanks to you, the track is now finished.
Best regards,
Andreas Hansen
https://soundcloud.com/kochen/revelation-original
(Feel free to give a like or a follow)
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
sounds good! i'd call it a done deal!
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]