New electronica "Ghost trains" ; comments wanted
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Today I finished a new track called "Dark trains".
It is a hommage to a famous super group of the seventies.
I tried to catch the sound of that time.
For the song I used an upcoming new http://www.tubeohm.com synth.
All synth parts and also the guitar are that new synth.
The rest is Groove agent 3 and some train samples.
Here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/ghost-trains
Your feedback is welcome.
It is a hommage to a famous super group of the seventies.
I tried to catch the sound of that time.
For the song I used an upcoming new http://www.tubeohm.com synth.
All synth parts and also the guitar are that new synth.
The rest is Groove agent 3 and some train samples.
Here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/ghost-trains
Your feedback is welcome.
Last edited by Gucky on Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:30 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
I just finished the final version of "Dark trains".
The previous version was only a rough mix.
The song is a tribute to a famous super goup of the seventies.
I would be happy about your feedback.
The previous version was only a rough mix.
The song is a tribute to a famous super goup of the seventies.
I would be happy about your feedback.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Today I heard my song again and I thought that I can make the mix better.
There are some little changes and a new drum groove at the end.
Normally I make another kind of music.
This is a flashback for me in the seventies where progressive and art rock were popular.
So I am very interested in your feedback!
There are some little changes and a new drum groove at the end.
Normally I make another kind of music.
This is a flashback for me in the seventies where progressive and art rock were popular.
So I am very interested in your feedback!
Last edited by Gucky on Sun Nov 23, 2014 7:32 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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- KVRian
- 938 posts since 29 May, 2011 from Germany
Being more of an ambient/electro/industrial person myself, I liked the style a lot, surprisingly I like how the song keeps building up without ever becoming boring.
The mix could use some cleaning up, though, if I may say so, it´s a bit muddled, especially whenever the "guitar" kicks in, a bit of EQing on the tracks might do wonders here.
The mix could use some cleaning up, though, if I may say so, it´s a bit muddled, especially whenever the "guitar" kicks in, a bit of EQing on the tracks might do wonders here.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Hi epiphaneia,
many thanks for your feedback. It was very helpful.
You are right it sounded a little bit muddled.
The reason was that I added some train noises in the back grounds that are too loud.
Now I changed the level a little bit and I added an eq on the guitar.
I hope it sounded now better.
What do you think?
many thanks for your feedback. It was very helpful.
You are right it sounded a little bit muddled.
The reason was that I added some train noises in the back grounds that are too loud.
Now I changed the level a little bit and I added an eq on the guitar.
I hope it sounded now better.
What do you think?
Last edited by Gucky on Fri Jan 09, 2015 11:43 am, edited 1 time in total.
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- 10196 posts since 12 Mar, 2012 from the Bavarian Alps to my feet and the globe around my head
Huh, where did all these ghosts come from in my room?
Great song, like a mysterious journey with a ghost train -- BTW, you should call it "Ghost trains" or in German "Höllenfahrt"!
Great song, like a mysterious journey with a ghost train -- BTW, you should call it "Ghost trains" or in German "Höllenfahrt"!
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Hi Tricky-Loops,
the name "Ghost trains" is a good name.
Thanks for your idea.
At the moment I am making a new Faber album with some darker songs.
For that reason the name is very good.
Faber is available on:
http://www.mellowjet.de
the name "Ghost trains" is a good name.
Thanks for your idea.
At the moment I am making a new Faber album with some darker songs.
For that reason the name is very good.
Faber is available on:
http://www.mellowjet.de
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- KVRian
- 938 posts since 29 May, 2011 from Germany
Good work!Gucky wrote: What do you think?
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/dark-trains
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
I just uploaded the ultimate final version of the song.
Hope you like it.
Feedbacks welcome.
Hope you like it.
Feedbacks welcome.
Last edited by Gucky on Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.
- KVRAF
- 2715 posts since 5 Jun, 2011 from Preston, England, UK
Great work,really enjoyed it.love the drums at 4.48
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music is a need in my life...yes I could survive without it but tbh I dont know how
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https://paulroach2.bandcamp.com/
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Now I made the very final version of "Ghost trains"
I would be happy about your feedback.
I would be happy about your feedback.
Last edited by Gucky on Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:31 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
I was not so happy with the last version of "Ghost Trains".
So I decided to make a new mix and I also added now a sequencer bass.
I hope that it is now better:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/ghost-trains
I would be happy about your feedback.
So I decided to make a new mix and I also added now a sequencer bass.
I hope that it is now better:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/ghost-trains
I would be happy about your feedback.