New electronica "Ghost trains" ; comments wanted

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Today I finished a new track called "Dark trains".
It is a hommage to a famous super group of the seventies.
I tried to catch the sound of that time.

For the song I used an upcoming new http://www.tubeohm.com synth.
All synth parts and also the guitar are that new synth.
The rest is Groove agent 3 and some train samples.

Here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/ghost-trains

Your feedback is welcome. :-)
Last edited by Gucky on Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:30 pm, edited 4 times in total.

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I just finished the final version of "Dark trains".
The previous version was only a rough mix.
The song is a tribute to a famous super goup of the seventies.
I would be happy about your feedback. :-)

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Today I heard my song again and I thought that I can make the mix better.
There are some little changes and a new drum groove at the end.
Normally I make another kind of music.
This is a flashback for me in the seventies where progressive and art rock were popular.
So I am very interested in your feedback! :-)
Last edited by Gucky on Sun Nov 23, 2014 7:32 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Being more of an ambient/electro/industrial person myself, I liked the style a lot, surprisingly 8) I like how the song keeps building up without ever becoming boring.

The mix could use some cleaning up, though, if I may say so, it´s a bit muddled, especially whenever the "guitar" kicks in, a bit of EQing on the tracks might do wonders here.

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Hi epiphaneia,
many thanks for your feedback. It was very helpful. :-)
You are right it sounded a little bit muddled.
The reason was that I added some train noises in the back grounds that are too loud.
Now I changed the level a little bit and I added an eq on the guitar.
I hope it sounded now better.
What do you think?
Last edited by Gucky on Fri Jan 09, 2015 11:43 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Huh, where did all these ghosts come from in my room? :scared:

Great song, like a mysterious journey with a ghost train -- BTW, you should call it "Ghost trains" or in German "Höllenfahrt"! 8)

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Hi Tricky-Loops,
the name "Ghost trains" is a good name.
Thanks for your idea. :-)
At the moment I am making a new Faber album with some darker songs.
For that reason the name is very good.


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http://www.mellowjet.de

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Gucky wrote: What do you think?
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/dark-trains
Good work! :tu: :phones:

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Thank you. :-)

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I just uploaded the ultimate final version of the song.
Hope you like it.
Feedbacks welcome.
Last edited by Gucky on Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Great work,really enjoyed it.love the drums at 4.48 :tu:
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Thanks for your feedback. :-)
Last edited by Gucky on Sat Dec 06, 2014 9:36 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Now I made the very final version of "Ghost trains"

I would be happy about your feedback. :-)
Last edited by Gucky on Fri Jan 09, 2015 8:31 pm, edited 2 times in total.

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I was not so happy with the last version of "Ghost Trains".
So I decided to make a new mix and I also added now a sequencer bass.
I hope that it is now better:

https://soundcloud.com/musikus/ghost-trains

I would be happy about your feedback. :-)

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