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aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Mon Nov 24, 2014 6:46 am

I put a couple of songs in my music website: "In My Mind" (the song on top) and "Need Cooperation" is the next song down. They have various synths, guitar, and electric bass. Please tell me how you like these songs and how they can be improved. If you review me, I will return the favor! Here is the link:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=224436

sbj · Post by **sbj** » Mon Nov 24, 2014 11:44 am

In my mind: Apart from the mix being in lack of punch I
liked the composition and the vocals.

It would really help IMO if the drums were "stronger"
and all the other elements were centered around them.

Need Cooperation: Again I really like the music itself.

As in - In my mind -all that is needed is a stronger mix.
Not to remove the lo-fi R'n'R feeling. Just to make it
more "in the face" and shine.

Take this with a grain of salt since one mans bread
is another mans death.

Cheers

aaron aardvark · Post by **aaron aardvark** » Tue Nov 25, 2014 6:16 am

sbj,
Thank you for the reviews! Leave me a link if there are any tunes you want me to review.

sbj · Post by **sbj** » Tue Nov 25, 2014 11:36 am

Hi Aaaron

You can find one of my tracks here:

http://www.kvraudio.com/forum/viewtopic ... 4&t=425249

2 songs to review (Will return the favor!) New Nov. 23rd!