KVR Audio

Daggilarr · Post by **Daggilarr** » Fri Nov 21, 2014 2:32 pm

Flowering tonight at a location near you. The flower of Peace. Please help the King in his efforts to cultivate this magical plant.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i_0M8Ex ... freload=10

folderol · Post by **folderol** » Mon Nov 24, 2014 7:38 pm

Enjoyed the story behind this, and the music fitted well. Vid was OK, but I think could have done with more development.

Daggilarr · Post by **Daggilarr** » Mon Nov 24, 2014 8:26 pm

Thanks Will. When you say development what would you suggest?

Best Francis

folderol · Post by **folderol** » Wed Nov 26, 2014 10:11 pm

Not really sure how to put it.
A hint of 'doubt' when the warriors think they're going in for an easy kill.
Firmness when the King puts them right.
Some sort of reprise as the warriors come to terms with it all.

Daggilarr · Post by **Daggilarr** » Sat Nov 29, 2014 11:00 pm

Ah ok I thought you meant the video. Yes the story line could easily be expanded but I deliberately left is lean so it could fit in the time frame of the music which came first.

I was worried that it would not get read fully if I put more text in. Do you think it could stand more text?

folderol · Post by **folderol** » Sat Nov 29, 2014 11:14 pm

No, I'd say it's about right, but the mood of the music doesn't shift to match the story line.

A message of peace