A message of peace
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 114 posts since 5 Jan, 2013 from Exeter, Devon UK
Flowering tonight at a location near you. The flower of Peace. Please help the King in his efforts to cultivate this magical plant.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i_0M8Ex ... freload=10
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i_0M8Ex ... freload=10
- KVRAF
- 5530 posts since 5 Aug, 2006 from UK - The Mudway Towns
Enjoyed the story behind this, and the music fitted well. Vid was OK, but I think could have done with more development.
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 114 posts since 5 Jan, 2013 from Exeter, Devon UK
Thanks Will. When you say development what would you suggest?
Best Francis
Best Francis
- KVRAF
- 5530 posts since 5 Aug, 2006 from UK - The Mudway Towns
Not really sure how to put it.
A hint of 'doubt' when the warriors think they're going in for an easy kill.
Firmness when the King puts them right.
Some sort of reprise as the warriors come to terms with it all.
A hint of 'doubt' when the warriors think they're going in for an easy kill.
Firmness when the King puts them right.
Some sort of reprise as the warriors come to terms with it all.
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 114 posts since 5 Jan, 2013 from Exeter, Devon UK
Ah ok I thought you meant the video. Yes the story line could easily be expanded but I deliberately left is lean so it could fit in the time frame of the music which came first.
I was worried that it would not get read fully if I put more text in. Do you think it could stand more text?
I was worried that it would not get read fully if I put more text in. Do you think it could stand more text?
- KVRAF
- 5530 posts since 5 Aug, 2006 from UK - The Mudway Towns
No, I'd say it's about right, but the mood of the music doesn't shift to match the story line.
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!