rock-pop song: "a meeting with myself"

[enroe]

Here's my latest song called "a meeting with myself":

direct mp3-link:
http://andy-enroe.bplaced.net/22_songs/ ... myself.mp3

site-link (with image-sequence + play-button):
http://andy-enroe.bplaced.net/22_songs/ ... myself.htm

Tell me, if you like it.
Tell me, if there are some specific points you would have made
in a different way ...

Greetings, Andy.

[enroe]

bump: Nobody here?

[Aloysius]

I like it!

Proper song. Great arrangement. Would be awesome with a Live Band.

[enroe]

Thank you Aloysius!

[Frantz]

I enjoyed this. It could be a modern day Syd Barrett track.

There are some vocal pitching issues. Perhaps the arrangement could benefit from more variation.

Overall, very cool.

[enroe]

Thank you Frantz.
Your association with Syd Barrett is a really high praise ... thanx!

A founder member of the band Pink Floyd, Syd Barrett was the lead vocalist, guitarist and principal songwriter in its early years and is credited with naming the band.

[folderol]

My first thought was "Where's all the backing?" but actually, this works very well as it is, suggesting a smallish band playing in some local venue.

[enroe]

My first thought was "Where's all the backing?" but actually, this works very well as it is, suggesting a smallish band playing in some local venue.

Thank you.

Yeah, no guitar-wall or organ-sound: The 8ths bass carries this song - a more minimalistic arrangement than generally expected.