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mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sat Dec 13, 2014 2:00 am

Just different....or maybe the norm.

https://soundcloud.com/sonic_arts/awoln ... mrme-cover

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Sat Dec 13, 2014 3:10 am

Good job. Very dark and intense. I checked out the AWOLNATION original and I prefer your version.

Perhaps your mix accentuates the highs and mid-range with not enough bass?

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sat Dec 13, 2014 5:09 pm

Shall I fill the low end? Thought it had a hollow, but yet comfortable feel.

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Sat Dec 13, 2014 5:14 pm

mr.me wrote:Shall I fill the low end? Thought it had a hollow, but yet comfortable feel.

I feel there's a frequency imbalance. Perhaps someone else will chime in on this.

nineofkings · Post by **nineofkings** » Sat Dec 13, 2014 5:35 pm

I like the changeup, but I feel like the syncopation of the lyrics can be awkward at times. In terms of the frequency balance, it sounds like it has a little too much trebley mids, maybe 5-8kHz.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sat Dec 13, 2014 7:25 pm

Thanks guys...and I am taking notes.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sat Dec 13, 2014 11:56 pm

Think that I might have it sorted now...a bit of tweaking and arranging.

hibidy · Post by **hibidy** » Sun Dec 14, 2014 1:33 am

Frantz wrote:Good job. Very dark and intense. I checked out the AWOLNATION original and I prefer your version.

Perhaps your mix accentuates the highs and mid-range with not enough bass?

I agree. Though a cool tune (the original) it's a little bit "samey" with some of the other techniques being used in pop music. This was nicely done, man, I wish I could sing

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Sun Dec 14, 2014 2:12 pm

Thanks man.

mr.me · Post by **mr.me** » Tue Dec 16, 2014 4:11 pm

bubble up. just in case.

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Fri Dec 19, 2014 1:56 am

I havn't heard the original, but this is good. I listened to the first mix at the weekend on my tablet and some tiny speakers. I didn't like the frequency balance too much then, but that could have been down to my tiny speakers. Listening tonight at home it sounds better, but that may be due to the changes referred to above. This sounds more Gorillaz than NIN

Good work

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Fri Dec 19, 2014 4:24 pm

This is a great track. I don't know the original, but you've created a really nice piece. Listening under less than ideal conditions atm, but I'd say the mix is still biased toward the mid high... not necessarily a huge deal unless you're after more balance.

sail cover (Quite Diferent)