Heimir - Circles (Progressive House/Trance)

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Hi guys here's a new song I did hope you like it :) https://soundcloud.com/heimiringi/circles-1
Last edited by heimirii on Wed Aug 12, 2015 6:15 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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I really like your song, nice one.

However 2 things have caught my attention :
-The volume is very low (not a big deal)
-There are some frequencies missing or too weak

You can see on spectrum there is a gap between mid-low (500Hz) and mid-high (2kHz). I think you should add a synth inside these frequencies.

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Ahh you are right will have to fix that.
what VST are you using to check out the freq response ?

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abyssin is right on the 500hz-2khz dip. i would also cut back on compression.
as it is now it sounds very constrained with so much compression combined with a low recording level.
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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layzer wrote: i would also cut back on compression.
as it is now it sounds very constrained with so much compression combined with a low recording level.
Hardly any going on though? but you are right about the low volume level :)

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heimirii wrote:
layzer wrote: i would also cut back on compression.
as it is now it sounds very constrained with so much compression combined with a low recording level.
Hardly any going on though? but you are right about the low volume level :)
ok, nvm...it must be the sidechain "pumping" compression i'm hearing. i've never liked that technique. it always sounds like a battery powerd amplifier cranked all the way up with weak batteries to me :lol:
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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So I went back in with your advices in mind and re-mixed it and this it the outcome.

Firstly i made the song louder, added a bit of freqs between 500-2000, i got rid of some of the high end so that the drums could cut through a bit more.

But I've been adding and decreasing the loudness of the high end and I'm never satisfied with the outcome, If i add some i think it's to much and if i take some of the high end away I start to think that the track is to dull.

So can anybody please tell me if it sound okay haha :)

https://soundcloud.com/heimiringi/circles-1/s-TtIyn

Thanks.

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Not there? :(
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!

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I deleted the one in the first post. there is a link to the song in the post before your :)
I could upload the first version again so you could compare

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sounds a little better frequency wise.. still seeing too much energy in the 25 - 50hz and the 5khz frequencies
also still too much compression, even for a dance track...i'm seeing 5.5 in the DR meter.
7 should be the max to shoot for.
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HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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Such a good feedback from you always Layzer, that you take your time and check all these details for people is amazing!. :tu:
Im gonna leave the track like this on my soundcloud for now since its atleast listenable but see if i cant fix what you mention, just for me in the daw.

Layzer do you produce your own music? if so id love to hear it :)
Last edited by heimirii on Wed Aug 12, 2015 4:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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heimirii wrote:Such a good feedback from you always Layzer, that you take your time and check all these details for people is amazing!. :tu:
Im gonna leave the track like this on my soundcloud for now since its atleast listenable but see if i cant what you mention i wrong in my daw, just for me.

Layzer do you produce your own music? if so id love to hear it :)
just tryin to help the community sound their best :hug:

and yeah....

https://soundcloud.com/layzerkvr
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]

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