Greetings all,
Just finished this new track up under my "AB neutral" project name. Would love to hear you comments.
https://soundcloud.com/ab-neutral/o-men
O-Men - new jungle-tech project
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 626 posts since 15 Jun, 2015
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- KVRAF
- 7540 posts since 7 Aug, 2003 from San Francisco Bay Area
I liked it! I had to listen because I was curious what jungle-tech was, but yes, that description makes perfect sense now.
As for comments, I kind of felt that the overall structure needed some work. The first vocals came in too soon. I think itwould be better to ease into them weigh something like that buildup you have in the last third of the song, then cut straight to the O's. Save the female vocals for a bit later, so you can more clearly define a B section. Just my thoughts...
As for comments, I kind of felt that the overall structure needed some work. The first vocals came in too soon. I think itwould be better to ease into them weigh something like that buildup you have in the last third of the song, then cut straight to the O's. Save the female vocals for a bit later, so you can more clearly define a B section. Just my thoughts...
Incomplete list of my gear: 1/8" audio input jack.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 626 posts since 15 Jun, 2015
Thanks for the input! For some reason, I didn't get notified when you posted your reply. I just happened to wander back by here and saw it.
I'll take a look at the positioning of that first female vocal sample. And you're suggesting I need another build-up before I hit any of the vocals, right?
I'll take another look at the project and give those ideas a shot.
I'll take a look at the positioning of that first female vocal sample. And you're suggesting I need another build-up before I hit any of the vocals, right?
I'll take another look at the project and give those ideas a shot.
