Falling stars
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 268 posts since 7 Mar, 2004 from Cremona, Italy
Hi all, here my last track made into Reason 8.3
https://soundcloud.com/emanuele-ballasina/falling_stars
https://youtu.be/9JvkRSQQ14g
http://emanuele-ballasina.bandcamp.com/ ... ling-stars
Hope you like it!
https://soundcloud.com/emanuele-ballasina/falling_stars
https://youtu.be/9JvkRSQQ14g
http://emanuele-ballasina.bandcamp.com/ ... ling-stars
Hope you like it!
- KVRAF
- 7150 posts since 4 Apr, 2005 from here and there
Great piano work! I'd have those strings just a tad lower in the mix (personal taste).
Very nice composition and effective buildup
Cheers
Very nice composition and effective buildup
Cheers
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 268 posts since 7 Mar, 2004 from Cremona, Italy
Wow, thanks very much friend!
Best,
Emanuele
Best,
Emanuele
- KVRist
- 251 posts since 19 Jan, 2004 from United Kingdom
Hi,
It's not bad. I think you should work on the structure a little bit more towards the end. Either adding a bridge or another part or breakdown etc.
The drums sound a little washed out too. I think the compression or limiting needs tweaking.
It's not bad. I think you should work on the structure a little bit more towards the end. Either adding a bridge or another part or breakdown etc.
The drums sound a little washed out too. I think the compression or limiting needs tweaking.
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- KVRian
- 645 posts since 4 Nov, 2013 from Vancouver, Canada
Pleasant track. I really enjoyed the piano work. I'm not quite as happy with the rest of the instrumentation, but as others have pointed out, this may be mostly a mixing issue. I'd also agree with Fature that a bridge or something like that toward the end would work nicely, because as it is, there isn't much variety (even though what you already have is nice).
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 268 posts since 7 Mar, 2004 from Cremona, Italy
Thanks very much for your constructive critiques! I'm not a good composer, nor a good mixing eng! But I'm learning each days something more...
Thanks very much!
Best
Emanuele
Thanks very much!
Best
Emanuele