Bang Bang, Future Bass, Feedback appreciated c:

[Mysco]

I've been working on this track for a few days or so now and it's not the greatest but I feel my skills are improving a decent bit. Would appreciate some feedback and tips from y'all.
Here's the link:
https://soundcloud.com/mysterycolours/bang-bang

[Laguna Rising]

Welcome to the Café
It sounds good but this not really my cup of tea
Just giving you a gently bump....

Cheers

[RamixOfficial]

Dope!!!!!!!!!!!!!