I remixed jasmines vocal over and over, I think I'm happy with it now..I think lol. in this collab I was shooting for a night club type thing where I'm just doing some live improv tracks (drifting in and out of consciousness) thanks so much for your patience jasmine you were wonderful.
https://soundcloud.com/wavephonic-1/tow ... ft-jasmine
drifting with jas
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- KVRian
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- 1278 posts since 11 Sep, 2006 from along the rivers edge in northern Ontario
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- KVRAF
- 2861 posts since 3 May, 2003 from Germany
Very good transparent, intimate Mix and a relaxed tune! Great vocals and arrangement. 
The only structural nitpicking irritation for me is the B-Part. And how it is combined/integrated. Seems to fall out of place, but can be intentional of course - just an impression after listening once.
The only structural nitpicking irritation for me is the B-Part. And how it is combined/integrated. Seems to fall out of place, but can be intentional of course - just an impression after listening once.
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Meet the Cities Repair Team Unimportant laughter
music has become meaningless...we just keep doing it
Meet the Cities Repair Team Unimportant laughter
music has become meaningless...we just keep doing it
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- KVRian
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- 1278 posts since 11 Sep, 2006 from along the rivers edge in northern Ontario
yup agree man, I gotta do a better job there, but I think we both came out influenced so it was worth giving this sort of thing a try.thomekk wrote:
The only structural nitpicking irritation for me is the B-Part. And how it is combined/integrated. Seems to fall out of place, but can be intentional of course - just an impression after listening once.
much appreciate you listening and commenting, have a great new year
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- KVRAF
- 2828 posts since 2 Mar, 2003 from The only civilized county in Texas
It sounds great and I like the freedom in the bass/drum part. Occasionally I really have to pay attention not to lose the beat. But that's cool.
Victor.
Victor.
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- KVRian
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- 1278 posts since 11 Sep, 2006 from along the rivers edge in northern Ontario
hey vic, thanks man. I thought of the singer wearing something very revealing in front of the kit and got lost a couple timesVicDiesel wrote:It sounds great and I like the freedom in the bass/drum part. Occasionally I really have to pay attention not to lose the beat. But that's cool.
Victor.
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- KVRAF
- 7153 posts since 4 Apr, 2005 from here and there
Very nice ! I like the anarchy / free-form /free-flowing or whatever you call it
It goes very well with those fantastic vocals (truly expressive) and well balanced mix: I think you did a great job
Very, Very good
It goes very well with those fantastic vocals (truly expressive) and well balanced mix: I think you did a great job
Very, Very good
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- KVRAF
- 3198 posts since 28 Aug, 2012 from Melbourne, Australia
Worth the effort.
Jasmine oozes feeling and your music supports her beautifully. Drifting with Jas is a great title.
Enjoying the piano muchly, excellent chords and melodies...
Fabulous!
Jasmine oozes feeling and your music supports her beautifully. Drifting with Jas is a great title.
Enjoying the piano muchly, excellent chords and melodies...
Fabulous!
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Music with progressive intent.
Music with progressive intent.
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- KVRian
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- 1278 posts since 11 Sep, 2006 from along the rivers edge in northern Ontario
well not quite anarchy, more like sold as is, lolLaguna Rising wrote: I like the anarchy
thanks as always for your continuing support laguna
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- KVRian
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- 1278 posts since 11 Sep, 2006 from along the rivers edge in northern Ontario
appreciate that, not a great piano player as some on the board but I was into itAllomerus wrote: Enjoying the piano muchly, excellent chords and melodies...
Fabulous!
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- KVRAF
- 12355 posts since 7 May, 2006 from Southern California
Freaking fantasic! Loved the sultry sounds and the rhythmic divergences. It really worked well.
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for sharing.
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- KVRian
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- 1278 posts since 11 Sep, 2006 from along the rivers edge in northern Ontario
happy about that comment from you, thankyou kindlyjustin3am wrote:Loved the sultry sounds and the rhythmic divergences.
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- 8182 posts since 22 Sep, 2008 from Windsor. UK
Love it. Wonderfully done.
If I had to nitpick (and I really don't, but I'm going to!) it's that the reverb on the vocal seems to be more 'roomy' than the rest of the instruments and because it's a close intimate track, it feels as though the vocal is a little separate from the rest of the parts. I would have preferred the other instruments to have had more of that particular ambiance, and less so on the vocal.
If I had to nitpick (and I really don't, but I'm going to!) it's that the reverb on the vocal seems to be more 'roomy' than the rest of the instruments and because it's a close intimate track, it feels as though the vocal is a little separate from the rest of the parts. I would have preferred the other instruments to have had more of that particular ambiance, and less so on the vocal.
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- KVRian
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thats a valid point thanks, I will have a peak back at thattehlord wrote: If I had to nitpick (and I really don't, but I'm going to!) it's that the reverb on the vocal seems to be more 'roomy' than the rest of the instruments and because it's a close intimate track, it feels as though the vocal is a little separate from the rest of the parts. I would have preferred the other instruments to have had more of that particular ambiance, and less so on the vocal.
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- KVRAF
- 7153 posts since 4 Apr, 2005 from here and there
wavephonic wrote:well not quite anarchy, more like sold as is, lolLaguna Rising wrote: I like the anarchy
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- KVRAF
- 11506 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
I liked the overall sound of this, and the sounds of the individual instruments. It definitely has that "night-club" vibe. I liked the bass/drums interaction, the piano playing was deft and sensitive. I could picture the pianist with a pork-pie hat, shades and a cigarette. The vocal performance was sensitive and dynamic without being overpowering. Just right for the song, which was superb.
Good work
Good work
