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annode
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Postby annode; Fri Apr 21, 2017 9:26 am Re: Electronic: (We Flourish in the) Mesolimbic Space Glow.

A lot of good stuff here.
Sounds like you put some time into the details.
A good strong melodic theme, percussion was perfect, not overbearing, was clean, sat brilliantly in the mix. Much of the sound choices fit well together...although I thought the bass sounded muddy and something else about the sound was not right. Can't put my finger on it.

The arrangement could have better been said in half the time. The whole thing was overstated.
Good work, but not completed.
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Montag
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Postby Montag; Sat Apr 22, 2017 6:35 am Re: Electronic: (We Flourish in the) Mesolimbic Space Glow.

:-D
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Postby layzer; Sat Apr 22, 2017 9:16 pm Re: Electronic: (We Flourish in the) Mesolimbic Space Glow.

cool song! nice use of kid voices. kinda "ring around the roses" fit in quite well.
could perhaps use a bit more high end sizzle?
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Postby Montag; Sat Apr 22, 2017 11:40 pm Re: Electronic: (We Flourish in the) Mesolimbic Space Glow.

Cheers. Aye. This is why I like floating prototypes :-)

I'll post back a revised version when I get back from holiday :-)

Thanks folk.
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Postby Montag; Sun Apr 23, 2017 2:11 am Re: Electronic: (We Flourish in the) Mesolimbic Space Glow.

Scraped an mp3 off soundcloud and did a basic chop job (in Reaper) to test diff structure... some of the worst edits I have done since being let loose on SoundTools on an Atari in 1994 :-)

Think it does work better pace wise... will obv need to d a bit of restructuring around coda, mid 8 and intro.

https://soundcloud.com/unk-cegi/spaceglow-edit

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