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jethrobull · Post by **jethrobull** » Sat Jun 16, 2018 11:46 am

https://soundcloud.com/jethrobull/pathogen

wagtunes · Post by **wagtunes** » Sat Jun 16, 2018 1:16 pm

My Feedback

Music - 8
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 10

Overall - 9

Comments: Nice creepy vibe on this one. In spite of the sparse (almost non existent) melody line for the first couple of minutes, it holds one's interest. The subtle arrangement variations work. Probably suited more to soundtrack than traditional song. Kept my interest all the way through.

Vortifex · Post by **Vortifex** » Mon Jun 18, 2018 12:59 pm

Eauson · Post by **Eauson** » Mon Jun 18, 2018 1:30 pm

Its got definite sinister stirrings to it, was more of a turn down a bit on my headphones than vice versa
Overall it held my attention, would had liked some hi synth to possibly add an additional edge to it.

TrekStar · Post by **TrekStar** » Mon Jun 18, 2018 9:06 pm

excellent, I enjoyed the listen! cool how you used that Alien Sound from war of the worlds + cool drumming + buildup of the song!
greetings
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jethrobull · Post by **jethrobull** » Thu Jun 21, 2018 3:52 am

wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 8
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 10

Overall - 9

Comments: Nice creepy vibe on this one. In spite of the sparse (almost non existent) melody line for the first couple of minutes, it holds one's interest. The subtle arrangement variations work. Probably suited more to soundtrack than traditional song. Kept my interest all the way through.

Hey, thanks for listening and I love your feedback system

Shangsean · Post by **Shangsean** » Thu Jun 21, 2018 12:33 pm

Fantastic stuff. You held my interest until the end. A great selection of sounds and effective progression. If I was going to nitpick, maybe a little more variation in the drums wouldn't go astray, but what's there is great.

Allomerus · Post by **Allomerus** » Fri Jun 22, 2018 10:27 am

Cool combination of drums and nasty synths!
The "bridge" and the second last section are my favourite parts...
Well done!

voidhead23 · Post by **voidhead23** » Sat Jun 23, 2018 3:21 am

Really well done. Reminds me a lot of Terminal Sound System...i really like the kit drums, and the arrangement, especially in the first 2/3rds of the song, is great.

A couple of mix suggestions: while i like the kit drums, they lack a bit of punch. Instead of screwing up the openness and natural sound of the drums themselves, maybe run them into some parallel compression and EQing to get a bit more smack without interfering with their actual sound. The drums may also be aided by a bit more variation. Are they MIDI or a live performance?

i also think the mix needs some EQ work...a bit more in the 'harsh' upper-midrange to really hit you when the synths bloom and some cutting in the lower mid frequencies to get rid of some of the mud that's happening. At the moment the mix sounds a little soft.

Adrian Earnshaw Music · Sat Jun 23, 2018 9:36 am

Love the horns of doom that introduce the track and continue throughout. Although it is mainly rhythmic there is enough going on to keep the listeners' interest. Nice creepy, horror track.

ChamMusic · Post by **ChamMusic** » Sat Jun 23, 2018 11:49 am

Had my big 150 W per channel speakers on high volume when I fist clicked on this (had been happily listening to DEVIL DRIVER, before an unwanted visitor arrived)!

That awesome opening sound - blew him through a portal into an alternate universe...f**king brilliant...thank you! :0)

Great track - loved it...sinister and disturbing..great sound combos.

I would've loved to hear a hooky lead melody of some sort as well, but you can't always have everything you want and it it works as it is very well!

One more listen and then back to DD!

jethrobull · Post by **jethrobull** » Sun Jun 24, 2018 3:16 am

Vortifex wrote:Man I really enjoyed that. Raw evilness. The darkness of the darkest of drum and bass crossed with live downtempo drums. I'd love to hear more stuff like this.

Thank you for taking the time to listen. I really appreciate your feedback

jethrobull · Post by **jethrobull** » Tue Jun 26, 2018 3:20 am

Eauson wrote:Its got definite sinister stirrings to it, was more of a turn down a bit on my headphones than vice versa
Overall it held my attention, would had liked some hi synth to possibly add an additional edge to it.

Hey,thank you for listening and the feedback. I really appreciate it. I am taking on board what is being said and there is always room for change

seismic1 · Post by **seismic1** » Thu Jun 28, 2018 1:10 am

My kind of soundtrack. It would make a perfect accompaniment to on-screen scenes of destruction. Great choice of individual sounds, and the combination of those sounds is terrific, in the original meaning of the word. I used to go shopping in Woking most weekends, and regularly made a point of going to see the Tripod.

https://www.geeksaresexy.net/2008/08/07 ... sculpture/

Good work

thecontrolcentre · Post by **thecontrolcentre** » Thu Jun 28, 2018 1:35 am

Cool stuff. I love the heavy, sinister vibe.

Pathogen