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Esgalachoir
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Postby Esgalachoir; Tue Jun 26, 2018 4:47 pm Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Many thanks again for the listen and kind words :tu:


:) :tu:
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Postby Mushy Mushy; Thu Jun 28, 2018 12:33 pm Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Bump before I pull it down to remix over the weekend.
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"
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Postby Mushy Mushy; Sat Jun 30, 2018 2:16 am Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Remixed to work better on a wider variety of speakers.
https://soundcloud.com/mushy-mushy/twisted-poetry
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"
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Postby Mushy Mushy; Sat Jul 14, 2018 10:57 am Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Drunkity bumpity
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"
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Postby MFXxx; Sat Jul 14, 2018 11:13 am Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Mate just picked a nice bag of green, will listen to this in more depth and breadth tonight.

From what I heard quickly - you've got a the sound spot on! :hug:
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Postby Mushy Mushy; Sun Jul 15, 2018 5:31 am Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

MFXxx wrote:Mate just picked a nice bag of green, will listen to this in more depth and breadth tonight.

From what I heard quickly - you've got a the sound spot on! :hug:

Thanks man. Looking forward to your thoughts.
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"
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Postby MFXxx; Sun Jul 15, 2018 2:32 pm Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

Love the subtle and textured intro.
Standard punder - nice
Enjoying the bass slide and subtle compression side-chaining.
Liking sfxs!
The synths build nicely into phase 2
Waiting for some vocal stabs/phrases to carve it up...love the break squidgy imploding acid lines!
Ears funbling over that hihat/cymbal rise...lush
...lush two fingers now hypnotically following that saturate acid lead.
Honestly middle part Im starting to drift...ever heard the Frankie Goes To Hollywood Relax sex mix, very similar sound effect to imitate the sound of rubber on rubber!
3.30 mins to 4mins still good work, Im losing interest.
..ah vocals. Seen a wolf with a Rhinos head. Just ran straight through my fooking room...
ALmost 80 styles lead souped up for some psy times coming in, building back to that saturated acid line.
...oooh its building again :) (Josh Wink momenty).

Spot on mate.

Personal notes only -
Bass, was wanting some sub bass line but maybe thats the mood Im in.
The 3-5min could be cut back, maybe even down to a shorter breakdown.
But what do I know ;)
Great work pal.
Hit the mood just nicely, feel in it in the haze :)

Mushy Mushy wrote:
MFXxx wrote:Mate just picked a nice bag of green, will listen to this in more depth and breadth tonight.

From what I heard quickly - you've got a the sound spot on! :hug:

Thanks man. Looking forward to your thoughts.
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Postby Mushy Mushy; Mon Jul 16, 2018 8:14 am Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

MFXxx wrote:Love the subtle and textured intro.
Standard punder - nice
Enjoying the bass slide and subtle compression side-chaining.
Liking sfxs!
The synths build nicely into phase 2
Waiting for some vocal stabs/phrases to carve it up...love the break squidgy imploding acid lines!
Ears funbling over that hihat/cymbal rise...lush
...lush two fingers now hypnotically following that saturate acid lead.
Honestly middle part Im starting to drift...ever heard the Frankie Goes To Hollywood Relax sex mix, very similar sound effect to imitate the sound of rubber on rubber!
3.30 mins to 4mins still good work, Im losing interest.
..ah vocals. Seen a wolf with a Rhinos head. Just ran straight through my fooking room...
ALmost 80 styles lead souped up for some psy times coming in, building back to that saturated acid line.
...oooh its building again :) (Josh Wink momenty).

Spot on mate.

Personal notes only -
Bass, was wanting some sub bass line but maybe thats the mood Im in.
The 3-5min could be cut back, maybe even down to a shorter breakdown.
But what do I know ;)
Great work pal.
Hit the mood just nicely, feel in it in the haze :)

Wow, now that's some detailed feedback :hyper:

I do agree with the majority of your points and I will revisit the track at some point. For now though I'm focused on a new one to keep me sane.
However I am curious about your comment regarding sub bass because on every system I've played it on it's potentially already too much IMO.

Thanks again, man. Most appreciated :tu:
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"
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Postby MFXxx; Mon Jul 16, 2018 8:46 am Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

I had another listen late last night on the 880s and yes I totally agree, enough low end bass (my bad) :)

The production is excellent and well balanced, really cant fault the mix levels and eq across the board.
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Postby Mushy Mushy; Mon Jul 16, 2018 12:34 pm Re: Twisted Poetry (Psytrance)

MFXxx wrote:I had another listen late last night on the 880s and yes I totally agree, enough low end bass (my bad) :)

The production is excellent and well balanced, really cant fault the mix levels and eq across the board.

:tu: Thanks, man.
"I was wondering if you'd like to try Magic Mushrooms"
"Oooh I dont know. Sounds a bit scary"
"It's not scary. You just lose a sense of who you are and all that sh!t"
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