A Wanton World
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1273 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
https://soundcloud.com/eauson/a-wanton-world
Thanks for looking and hopefully listening
feedback and comments welcomed
Thanks for looking and hopefully listening
feedback and comments welcomed
Last edited by Eauson on Fri Jul 20, 2018 11:28 am, edited 2 times in total.
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
- KVRAF
- 21195 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
My Feedback
Music - 9
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 9
Mix - 8.5
Overall - 9
Comments: Very unusual sounding piece. Interested in what synths you used. Do I hear a vocoder in there? Very well done. Would appreciate a return listen on my latest track. Worked very hard on it. Sorry, hate to go begging but I get very little feedback around here. Thanks.
Music - 9
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 9
Mix - 8.5
Overall - 9
Comments: Very unusual sounding piece. Interested in what synths you used. Do I hear a vocoder in there? Very well done. Would appreciate a return listen on my latest track. Worked very hard on it. Sorry, hate to go begging but I get very little feedback around here. Thanks.
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- KVRian
- 766 posts since 23 Sep, 2003 from UK
Nice sparse instrumentation but really smooth to listen to.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1273 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Thanks Wags, its still a bit rough, was my 1st attempt @something like this, its more complex than I realised,, no vocoder.wagtunes wrote:My Feedback
Music - 9
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 9
Mix - 8.5
Overall - 9
Comments: Very unusual sounding piece. Interested in what synths you used. Do I hear a vocoder in there? Very well done. Would appreciate a return listen on my latest track. Worked very hard on it. Sorry, hate to go begging but I get very little feedback around here. Thanks.
Many thanks, I still hear high pitch warbling on the synthetic strings and it was a real pain to get a good balance, still not 100% happy, but it started to get to me, as i try not to overwork what i make, so I thought I would release it into the wildernessbiodiode wrote:Nice sparse instrumentation but really smooth to listen to.
Thanks once again for listening
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
It's a quirky little piece...enjoyed listening to it.
The rhythmic dissonance between the various strands is particularly interesting...it grated at first, but then grew on me the more I listened.
For me, the 'big' sound that enters around halfway is too dominant and everything else disappears in the mix at that point.
I also wanted some contrast, especially on the second listen...some different material to take me away from the ethereal quirkiness for 30 seconds or so.
The rhythmic dissonance between the various strands is particularly interesting...it grated at first, but then grew on me the more I listened.
For me, the 'big' sound that enters around halfway is too dominant and everything else disappears in the mix at that point.
I also wanted some contrast, especially on the second listen...some different material to take me away from the ethereal quirkiness for 30 seconds or so.
Why is it a 'classical' piece? Not the way I heard it at all.Eauson wrote:A classical piece using synthesis
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1273 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Thanks, it was a track which I had put down really quickly and then found my self trying to get it to gel, the synth I was using kept on giving me random velocities so I just bounced it down, did a quick loudness increase and put it here for feedback/comment. As you say, it could do with a section to change the tone, which hopefully will arrive at some pointChamMusic wrote:It's a quirky little piece...enjoyed listening to it.
The rhythmic dissonance between the various strands is particularly interesting...it grated at first, but then grew on me the more I listened.
For me, the 'big' sound that enters around halfway is too dominant and everything else disappears in the mix at that point.
I also wanted some contrast, especially on the second listen...some different material to take me away from the ethereal quirkiness for 30 seconds or so.
Why is it a 'classical' piece? Not the way I heard it at all.Eauson wrote:A classical piece using synthesis
The reason behind the classical was I didn't know what it was and it was a naïve trial of synthesis of piano, string, harp etc which to me are classical instruments, I had originally written classical?, just wasn't sure, any suggestions?
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
They are instruments that are regularly used in a lot of different styles of music! :0)Eauson wrote:synthesis of piano, string, harp etc which to me are classical instruments
Don't worry about what genre / style it is...let each listener decide for themselves! :0)Eauson wrote:I had originally written classical?, just wasn't sure, any suggestions?
To me it's light, ambient electronica, but others will have different opinions...doesn't really matter that much! :0) Not a great fan of pigeon-holing music into genres anyway.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1273 posts since 9 Jan, 2013 from morf
Okay, thanks, deleted classical, maybe get more listensChamMusic wrote:They are instruments that are regularly used in a lot of different styles of music! :0)Eauson wrote:synthesis of piano, string, harp etc which to me are classical instruments
Don't worry about what genre / style it is...let each listener decide for themselves! :0)Eauson wrote:I had originally written classical?, just wasn't sure, any suggestions?
To me it's light, ambient electronica, but others will have different opinions...doesn't really matter that much! :0) Not a great fan of pigeon-holing music into genres anyway.
As to regular use of instruments, its true, just wasn't sure what it was
Man is least himself when he talks in the first person. Give him a mask, and he'll show you his true face