http://maxb.altervista.org/MP3/MassimoB ... AStory.mp3
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Have fun!
Tell me a Story
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- KVRAF
- 2665 posts since 11 Jun, 2007
Hi Max,
please check the link, the space makes the link invalid.
Nice tune, I like the beginning and the ending. The middle part (where the drums are starting) is too cheesy for me in a certain way. At first I thought this would be a trance tune and then ...
Nice sounds in general. Maybe you would want to check if you can mix the choir more modern which would fit the rest of the tune better me thinks.
Shogger
please check the link, the space makes the link invalid.
Nice tune, I like the beginning and the ending. The middle part (where the drums are starting) is too cheesy for me in a certain way. At first I thought this would be a trance tune and then ...
Nice sounds in general. Maybe you would want to check if you can mix the choir more modern which would fit the rest of the tune better me thinks.
Shogger
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 4585 posts since 2 Nov, 2006
Thanks for the comment Shoggershogger wrote:Hi Max,
please check the link, the space makes the link invalid.
Nice tune, I like the beginning and the ending. The middle part (where the drums are starting) is too cheesy for me in a certain way. At first I thought this would be a trance tune and then ...
Nice sounds in general. Maybe you would want to check if you can mix the choir more modern which would fit the rest of the tune better me thinks.
Shogger
Sssshhh keep the secret: I know why it sounds cheesy
Because all the sounds are from a library I put together using very very old samples (some samples are from the Amiga MOD scene). About the choir I don't know what you mean with "more modern". Anyway I had a lot of problems to make the choir stand in the mix so I'm not surprised you find something wrong in it
What's your suggestion? Volume? Eq? Any tip is appreciated Max
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- KVRAF
- 5530 posts since 5 Aug, 2006 from UK - The Mudway Towns
Please do some more work on this. It is very promising, but the quality of the sounds let it down - don't know if that's your sources or a hurried mix.
I like the way it develops, but think there is plenty of room for it to do more later on - yes it needs to be a lot longer
I like the way it develops, but think there is plenty of room for it to do more later on - yes it needs to be a lot longer
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was) - apparently now an 'elderly' so maybe I forgot!
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 4585 posts since 2 Nov, 2006
Thanks. Has been done very quickly in just one night as a "gift" for a friend. Yes I think It's a little short. I'll continue to work on this one later...folderol wrote:Please do some more work on this. It is very promising, but the quality of the sounds let it down - don't know if that's your sources or a hurried mix.
I like the way it develops, but think there is plenty of room for it to do more later on - yes it needs to be a lot longer
In the meantime a friend has been so kind to make a video out of it
Enjoy:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EdiM5bAwlXk
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- KVRAF
- 2665 posts since 11 Jun, 2007
Hi Max,MaxSynths wrote:About the choir I don't know what you mean with "more modern". Anyway I had a lot of problems to make the choir stand in the mix so I'm not surprised you find something wrong in it
Max
cut the mids in the choir a little at 750Hz to make it sound more balanced.
Shogger
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- KVRAF
- 5782 posts since 10 Mar, 2003 from Music Shed #8
i clicked the link, and got:
"Pony Mania
Passione per l'equitazione
Tutto su pony e cavalli
Sito dedicato ad una passione per i pony ed una passione per i cavalli"
i was amused to discover that the italian word for "pony" is..."pony", but i don't think that's what you intended.
"Pony Mania
Passione per l'equitazione
Tutto su pony e cavalli
Sito dedicato ad una passione per i pony ed una passione per i cavalli"
i was amused to discover that the italian word for "pony" is..."pony", but i don't think that's what you intended.
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- KVRAF
- 5782 posts since 10 Mar, 2003 from Music Shed #8
successfully downloaded. i can only echo all previous comments, including your own re: old sound libraries.
regarding making the choir sound more "modern" - perhaps it sounds a little too munchkin-ised/keyboard driven, like the notes are being switched on and switched off rather than being sung. Emulator-II style?
regarding making the choir sound more "modern" - perhaps it sounds a little too munchkin-ised/keyboard driven, like the notes are being switched on and switched off rather than being sung. Emulator-II style?
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 4585 posts since 2 Nov, 2006
No: Symphony if Voices styleclueless wrote:successfully downloaded. i can only echo all previous comments, including your own re: old sound libraries.
regarding making the choir sound more "modern" - perhaps it sounds a little too munchkin-ised/keyboard driven, like the notes are being switched on and switched off rather than being sung. Emulator-II style?
The only modern thing in it. Well I don't know... it's a soprano choir played staccato. I've tried to do the best with the notes "on-off switching" Anyway this is the first time I used the library so I have to practice, I suppose.Sorry for the pony accident
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 4585 posts since 2 Nov, 2006
LOLshogger wrote:Hi Max,MaxSynths wrote:About the choir I don't know what you mean with "more modern". Anyway I had a lot of problems to make the choir stand in the mix so I'm not surprised you find something wrong in it
Max
cut the mids in the choir a little at 750Hz to make it sound more balanced.
Shogger
It's just the frequency I have boosted to make the choir more present I know what's happened... I was excited with the new library and I've spent too much time on the choir. I'll try to fix it tomorrow. Thanks for the tip.
