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vata44 · Post by **vata44** » Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:17 pm

So I have taken a long break from music... I sat down the other day and this is what progressively came out.

I am curious how you feel this flows? Do the parts work together? Is it cohesive or a pleasure to listen to? Is it totally out of tune/stupid?

Any help in arrangement, mixing, etc would be extremely helpful.

I have fun making it, but I am just curious if it can translate to others at all.

Thanks,
Forrest

OmniPsyence · Post by **OmniPsyence** » Fri Feb 17, 2012 5:35 pm

Excellent work as usual! I commented on this when you posted it on Facebook, I really enjoyed that track.

Programentalist · Post by **Programentalist** » Fri Feb 17, 2012 7:11 pm

I'd say it works, nice comeback to the music world! I just started myself a few weeks ago after a LONG hiatus, it's nice to be back eh?

The mix works well here, nothing sticks out in a bad way, in fact everything is very relaxed and smooth which suits the track perfectly.

It's definitely very chill, but I didn't find myself getting bored or annoyed about anything, so yeah, good job!

EDIT: The track just stopped, maybe a short fadeout at the end, that's all I can come up with for constructive criticism

vata44 · Post by **vata44** » Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:39 pm

thank you both...

I will move on with it. whipped out my keyboard, SO MUCH nicer than the QWERTY virtual piano.

omni... lets keep in touch. thanks

thenumber23 · Post by **thenumber23** » Sun Feb 19, 2012 12:12 am

Suggestions? Keep doing what you're doing -- that song was great! Warm, great orchestration, and everything fit just right. That tune would be at home on any chillout compilation.

Brian

PaleBlueDot · Post by **PaleBlueDot** » Mon Feb 20, 2012 4:06 am

thenumber23 wrote:Suggestions? Keep doing what you're doing -- that song was great! Warm, great orchestration, and everything fit just right. That tune would be at home on any chillout compilation.

Brian

I second that. Great track

fateamenabletochange · Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:56 am

Lovely deep poignancy, on god comfort one. The next one on the player with Leah, fine songcrafting. Cool stuff.

polyslax · Post by **polyslax** » Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:38 pm

Yeah that is a really nice track!

I took a 7 year break last time... it's good to clear the mind.

Jace-BeOS · Post by **Jace-BeOS** » Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:03 pm

i don't see a link in the original post

Programentalist · Post by **Programentalist** » Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:08 pm

You're right about that, it seems it was edited out?

Need some feedback/review and suggestions... please :) (chillout)