here it is with another hour between calls
more automation, a bit of mixing (tho i don't have monitors here, just laptop speakers and sony earbuds)

http://k004.kiwi6.com/hotlink/et8e44hugc/01_schrodinger_s_mo use.mp3

daytime bump since someone posted like 22 threads and filled the whole cafe

Nice track, I like the quality and choice of synths sounds.
Good energy thing, I enjoyed it

Cheers

thanks a lot

final bump just to get some daytome commenters involved

thanks for 1000 listen

The bells in the beginning are a little uncomfortable to listen to, like they hurt just a little bit. I think I would find another sound to go there instead of trying to EQ them. You really should buy some decent monitors for mixing. They can make a big difference. Your mix is pretty good though regardless. Although things do sound a little "crowded". I would incorporate some panning. I found the drums a little too simple and they did not give the track any time to breathe at all, just all straight forward. This is all of course just my opinion by the way. I would work on the drums some more and try not to make it so repetitive.

thanks, i will take that into account

regarding monitors, i have a great pair of tannoys at home but this was just thrown together at work in between calls on the laptop speakers

the bell already disapeared from the mix and "air" has been carved in the wall of noise, the drums will see their makeover when and if this one gets picked for the album release (right now its basically 1 8 bar loops with hats variation, no kick or snare variation or percs

panning is already taken care of (as soon as i heard it in the studio in stereo i places sounds around