Please tel me what do you think, i need to change anything?

http://soundcloud.com/krkr-1/ypsilon

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Hey there,

I'm not sure this is exactly my genre of music, but it seems like a good start. It's got a nice groove in the beginning, but it gets a little repetative as the piece goes on. That's kind of the nature of the genre (a little bit) but even then it seems like it could do with a little more variation on the theme as it were-either through counter melody, or even just more modulation and movement in the instrumentation.

I don't know. That's just me. Again, I'm not sure I'm the audience for this kind of material, but if it were me, I'd keep working on trying to make it more interesting and add some unpredictability here and there (within the constructs of the genre, of course).

I do like the groove, and the way it sort of sets you up for something cool to come, though.

hi,

thanks for the comment, when i done this melody i was happy with it, that's why i don't realy want to add something else:)