couple of hours, headphones on, still all live built ins, couple drum sounds from my stash, and camelspace on a one of the "leads"
http://k005.kiwi6.com/hotlink/exjvg64561/01_roger.mp3

I really liked this one. Lots of aural surprises and really well put together. Not static at all but always moving.

Don't know how we do constructive criticism around here but speaking strictly from my personal preferences i thought the amount of distortion slightly overpowered the melodies,you just get a massive wall of sound. Maybe dial that down a bit to let the melodies "breathe" a bit. The drums being mostly mono (except from some cymbals) felt a bit odd against the super wide synths. But as i already said these are only my personal preferences not the final say in good production.

i forgot to pan my drums lol, but since it's just a demo, i get a second chance at mixing

thnaks for listening and taking time to write a "review"

as for the distortion, i didint even know i had melodies, so i will clear that up

Cooleo! Damn! This is down and dirty-clitched out-nice one! 0-@